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Re: Abby
Yo. Jimss here. Thought I would pop my oversized apple head in and do a quick review. Customary disclaimer; I have zero grammar talents so don't take anything I say ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: something about the world
Yo. Jimmy here It's Review Day! Thought I would pop in and give ya my thoughts on ya work. My customary disclaimer; Grammar is not my strong suit. Can't help ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: One
Yo. Jimss here. Thought I would pop by on this glorious review day to throw my two cents in here. Ok, my customary disclaimer. You would need a microscope to ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Grim's Tales Of Heros and Halfwits Part 1
AHAHAHAHA!! I HAVE RETURNED! Seriously though, it has been a long time since I logged on and saw all the tags so thought I might work my way backward here. ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 1 (rough draft)
Yo. Jimmy here. Thought I would come by and do a little review. So, here it goes. First, my usual disclaimer. I have no grammar skills so if you need ...
Dec 5, 2017 -
Re: Earth's Child [Chapter 1]
Yo. Jimmy here. Here to do a little review for ya! Welcome to YWS by the way. I hope you enjoy yourself here. Alright, on to the business at hand. ...
Nov 28, 2017 -
Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 8
Jimmy here Yo I hath slithered out of the gutter whole I found myself in and decided to pop open my laptop and do a little review. Again. May God ...
Nov 23, 2017 -
Re: Monster wars: The Werewolf versus the Gargoyle
Jimmy here. Yo. So, I decided to stop on by and do a little review here. Hopefully, I can offer something useful to make this story better! Customary disclaimer, I ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 7
Jimmy here. Yo. Thought I would pop on by and give this work a little review. So, I did a quick read over your previous chapters before reviewing this, emphasis ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: Overworld- Chapter 2: Invitation
Jimmy here. I was strolling through the green room and decided I would stop by and give a little feedback on your work. I do rather enjoy reviewing novels and ...
Nov 13, 2017 -
Re: Character Creation 2
Jimmy here. Howdy. Thought I would pop in here and give ya my thoughts. Nothing wrong with getting opinions on characters right? Two little things before I start that I ...
Nov 7, 2017 -
Re: The Infected Chapter IV - Matt 3.0: The Titanium Terminal
Jimmy here. Time to brush off my old reviewing skills and take them for a spin. I hath come forth from the darkness of my humble abode to see if ...
Nov 3, 2017 -
Re: You did not read this.
Ho Ho Ho, here we go. I am Jimmy, a green apple. Like an apple, I can be sweet or be sour. So let's go. Gaslighting. An interesting concept to ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 4
Fall's off a tree and inspires Calculus... Heeeeerrreeeee's JIMMYYY!! Chapter 4. Time to get rolling. I'm gonna stick to my usual stuff here cause you said it was really useful! ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Truths, Brazen Lies Chap. 3
You know who it is :D Hey. So I'm back. Sorry, it took me so long. I will try to keep up with these things I promise. Alright, Chapter 3. ...
Aug 29, 2017