Thanks for sharing. I like the second person singular POV you used. Makes the reader feel personally involved. The three sentences that are bolded are indeed good examples of striving to make a person doubt his own sanity or gas lighting. The poem effectively conveys the maliciousness of the person attempting it. Reminds me of the term brainwashing where the person's whole personality undergoes a drastic changer after being subjected to that kind of attack. Good illustration!
Suggestion:
The second, third, sixth, and seventh lines should end in a period.
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