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Hey Junel! Really love the title and description you gave. "You chose me And built me up - Now you tear me down" Very relatable words here, I would just ...

Hey brebre, it's pretty hard to critique a piece based on a personal experience. So I'll try to tip-toe around the harsh critique and give you my impressions. "The worst ...

I feel so lucky being the first to critique this. I was wondering why no one else had yet till I looked at the date (teehee). I'll get the nitpicks ...

I reeeeeeally wanna write a good review on this one. But damn it's too good (not that I wanted it to be bad or anything). I don't think I'll be ...

When I first read your title, I was sorta praying you weren't serious (knee-jerk reaction sorry). Then I read it and... I'm thinking that this is gonna be hard to ...

Woah. O.o Your poem had me thinking about a beautiful scenic park, especially with that title, until I realized it was a graveyard... I like it! :D "Shady leaves mask ...

Some spelling spikes, and I really think you should've broken up this long paragraph... but other than that, I sincerely hope your not gonna make a disappearance any time soon. ...

I really liked the title you put to this piece. It's simple and pretty much to the point. :) I have to be honest and say that the start hit ...

I'm looking at the review you have so far... and am now comparing it to the time this was posted... still somehow I think this poem needs more freaking attention. ...

It was a bit slow to peak my interest at first, I must admit. But I hung in there, for the payoff. "I wish I had back for her, had ...

Woah.... Kay this was craaaaazy good.... I don't have much to say tbh, but wow.... Sorry. I'm a bit too dazed to write anything expect -wow- at the moment. You ...

Last stanza got me. I found myself squirming a bit round the rest. Not because it was awful, but because your description was so raw that I felt uncomfortable reading ...

Simple and flawless. Had my eyes doing the creepy side-to-side thing, but it was very pretty. More than that actually, it was gorgeous. 0///0 "The games you’d always play" Love ...

Holy SMOKES! :O tbh, I was pretty confused at first. Sort of thinking like 'Wats she on about?'- But count my stars that was terrific!! Such a treat to read. ...