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Re: I think I love an assassin
Hey Retrodisco666, Here to review.! My corrections shall be in red.! The things I like in blue :]Hope you take the time to read it all :] Everyone will fall ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Perish Alone
Hello ThatBoy.!, I Am Here To Review Even though there isn't much. I Really liked how you described the scene that was happening in the poem, but you could have ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Fighting Waves
To be honest this didn't confuse me at all. I found it to be well- written and i felt like i kind of could relate to it. But I'm not ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Blood
OMG.! Dude this is kinda eerie ... I Love it.! Its really well written just some little details that i shall point out in ..uhmm RED?And CAPITALS..!? Their THERE is ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Love is cancer
O.K ...I'm going to be honest ..I'm not that great at reviewing.. Butt anywho ... I absolutely LOVE (no pun intended) this piece . I found it to flow very ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: The Evil Within (prologue and chapter one)
O.K .. one word! amazing! ...i really like this. And for someone who doesn't have alot of experience writing your doing a fantastic job!!! seriously.! i love your use of ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: { Nonexistence }
Very nice .... I'm impressed to say the least. I did find your structure very interesting. I could definitely see someone reading this aloud to me with powerful emotions in ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: The Colors
Beautiful poem. Its very nice and i find it is written some what well. Just one thing, though , i find its kind of hard to read. It could just ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Angel of the dark
WHOA!!! Totally loved! that. It's very deep. Definitely MY KIND OF POETRY :). Just one thing ... even though it's poetry, it still needs punctuation. It helps the reader know ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: What Else Is There To Say About Hitler?
I think this is a perfect description of Adolf Hitler. In my english class right now we're reading Anne Frank and about the Holocaust, so this defintiely describes the man ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Broken Silence Chapter One
Ok so to be honest im not to used to giving reviews but here it goes..... well i found the topic of the story really interesting and attention grabbing. i ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Slayer (Chapter One)
this is very interesting . its good, but sort of rushed. you need to slow it down and work on your details. it would make the story more intriguing and ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: In The Company of a Vampire: chp I 1/3
Whoa i really really like this. its descriptive but you can sort of sense the emotions basically in the air, around him. and i totally totally loved the whole thing ...
Apr 23, 2010