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I think this is off to a good start and I like it, but in order to pull this topic off, we need to individualize the poem. Go to an ...

This was absolutely beautiful! Your use of imagery sparked my mind and set a tense tone. nI might need to read it twice though to understand exactly whats going on. ...

I think this has a good theme and a lot of creative space for imagery, but theres just a few things you could modify :p You should spice up your ...

Wow. You've described such a simple action, but in a very beautiful way! I love your use of diction and choice of imagery. The stanza placement is questionable at first, ...

This was very lyrical! I actually read it like a rap in my head. I think if you played with the placement of the stanzas, you could have a nice ...

I like the way this flows and you're on the right track, but some suggestions: Although rhyming can be a great addition to any poem, it has to be pulled ...

I absolutely loved this. It can be related to anyone. Humans always tend to think that they aren't good enough for someone, that they don't measure up. Well, maybe not ...

Hi :) You've got a lovely idea going on here. But with any piece, there are changes that could be taken into consideration. The topic of love, heartbreak, or envy ...

Love is a hard topic to pull off successfully. It's one of the most preferred things to write about, so The writer has to differentiate them self from the crowd ...

So firstly, i would like to say that I am absolutely obsessed with trees, so this caught my attention instantly. Sadness and trees seem to go well together! I enjoyed ...

Despite being in progress, I enjoyed the theme of this piece. As you said, it can correlate to so many situations! I honestly don't have much to say. But a ...

Hi! So I found this poem rather compelling, but like with any piece of literary work, there's always room for improvement :P Something that stuck out to me was the ...

This was very beautiful and that's all I really want to say. I hope nobody tries to harshly critique this and mold it into something it isn't. It flowed nicely ...

I loved it. So much. I just wanted to tell you that. I don't think that there is anything wrong with this poem. please continue writing!

Somewhat... confusing. But I really liked it. I'm wondering what the end means? That's mainly what confuses me. I know the ghosts name is Grant, but I'm still lost. Maybe ...