Young Writers Society

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Let me just say, i found this work particularly well done. Your imagery was very well done, particularly in lines twenty one through thirty, ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To begin, this was very well laid out. You seem to have a good grasp on your topic, and are fairly good at conveying ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Ah, so we meet again! To be completely honest, i like this piece better than "Broken Bridges", which is the last piece of yours ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start off, i'd like to say that i really liked this piece. It has very good imagery, which i think is extremely important ...

Hello, herbgirl here for a review! Before i start, let me just say welcome to YWS! i hope you enjoy your time here, i know i sure have! If you ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Reading this, i can get the idea that you have a lot of emotions, and have turned to poetry to let them out. Awesome! ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! i hope you enjoy your time here! i know i sure have so far. Now, on to the ...

Hello! herbgirl her for a review! To start, let me just say i REALLY liked this poem. The imagery was very well done, you painted a beautifully gruesome image that ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! i hope you enjoy your time here, i know i sure have so far! If you need any help or advice on anything, feel ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Ohhhh! The first paragraph of this short little story had me hooked. Your imagery is very unique and compelling, not just in the introductory ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start, i would like to say i like this poem. i get the impression that you have developed a very strong character here, ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! First of all, I just want to praise you for this piece. I LOVED IT! I was originally attracted to it by your description ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is a cool story concept. As you said, it has been done before, I think perhaps most famously in the movie "Groundhog Day". ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start this review, I'd like to say that the flow at the beginning of this poem was very nice. It kind of pulled ...

Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I really liked this piece! You had some fantastic imagery in it, and painted a beautiful, haunting scene with your descriptions of the graveyard. ...