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herbgirl

  • Poetry » General, General Re: steel rods

    Hi! herbgirl here for a review! So, I'd like to start out by saying this poem and interesting format which I must admit I am a fan of. It's different, ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: I Love You

    Hi! herbgirl here for a review! So, to start, I would like to say that I liked the repetition in this poem of the phrase "I love you more." Repetition ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Suicide

    Hi! herbgirl here for a review! I wanted to start by saying this poem seems very lyrical, the words you chose kind of just make it flow, it's very impressive. ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Midnight Serenades

    Hi! herbgirl here a review! So, to start, this is really short, so it's a little difficult to review, but it's so beautiful I think you deserve some feedback. That's ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Redemption

    Hi! herbgirl here for a review! So, to start, I'd like to say that I like the idea of this poem, and I especially like the last two stanzas. It's ...

    Jun 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spoiled Rotten

    Hi! herbgirl here for a review! First of all I would like to say this piece reminds me a bit of a Langston Hughes poem called "Harlem". The imagery here, ...

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: trapped

    Hey! herbgirl here for a review! So, first of all, I'd like to say that I really like the imagery in this poem. Things like "A fog of depression" and ...

    May 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Meet in the Middle

    Hi! I really like what this poem is about. You express how people argue about their opinions in a very clear, chill way. I think it's very effective, as is ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Characters

    This is a really nice poem! Weren't we just talking about you having this problem with your characters? Anyways, I like the flow of the majority of the poem, but ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Handwriting

    Hey! I really like this poem because it's something I, and probably most people can relate to. I always take so much time to make my handwriting nice, but then ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Colors

    First of all, I would like to say that I only understand the colors because I just looked them up. I'm sorry!!! I am a failure. However, even if I ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Angels

    Beautiful. Just beautiful. I love this rhyme scheme, the ABCB. It's my favorite, I use it all the time. The entire thing really just rolls off the tongue, really, it ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I don't

    Hi! herby here for a review! First of all, I like how this poem is written, it flows pretty well, which makes it nice to read. I feel like it ...

    Apr 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Nothing Yet

    Hi, herby here for a review! I really like this poem! I love the idea you express, it's something I struggle with sometimes. Just, why does everyone follow the guidelines ...

    Apr 12, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: These Thoughts of Mine

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I really like the idea the poem expresses. The way you talk about ideas and thoughts just swirling around and disappearing, a messy ...

    Apr 1, 2016


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