hayley10019

I liked it. I didn't think it could be a descriptive, emotional poem since it was so short, but it was. I liked it. How in the poem you were ...

Honestly there is nothing to judge here. It was an amazingly well written poem. It conveyed lust in..a graphic manner and made the reader keep reading. If the title were ...

Awe! I thought it was ADORABLE! It was really sweet and cute.. And honestly I hope you get this girl if you want her this bad! It's a great poem! ...

It's cute and short and sweet! The only thing is I think you need a little more emotion? Maybe? I don't want to be too rude but I feel like ...

Wow. I thought it was a powerful poem. I liked it all.. a lot. I liked the rhyming and just the poem itself. There was a lot of emotion and ...

I enjoyed it a lot. Aside from the different rhyming schemes I liked and understood the poem well. Everyone is a therapist at sometime and I honestly believe that your ...

I really liked your imagery. It was nice watching the images as you read along with the poem. But, I think you mean 'because' not 'becoz' on the second line? ...

I don't care what anyone else says about the rhyming and the Her-her thing, it was amazing and precious. It was something that you can only write with true emotion. ...

I'm not sure if this was about you feeling evil, or just.. seeing evil itself around or in you. But still, I liked the poem because of the way you ...

I loved it. I always like it when a writer...writes...about writing. Lol. But it explained writing itself and I liked the way you wrote it. You showed what the basics ...

I liked it. It was very intense and had a lot of regret and emotion in it. Usually rhyming is over done or not good with the poems, but with ...

I really liked it! It was interesting, short and sweet! I'm not too sure what I can say about this because there are no flaws and not much there that ...

Congrats on your first poem. It was good, but like others said before you did rely on rhyming a lot. But that's not too bad. But if you can't get ...

I liked it a lot. I see how you feel, how your hurt and mad. How your still in question and how you honestly don't know where to go or ...

I really liked it and you picked a topic that a LOT of people can relate to. Me being one of them. Thinking you love someone, and then being let ...