harshita3chaarag

Hello there. What can I even say, that won't be drenched with emotion. Yup, I also had an experience similar to this. The difference was that we were involved for ...

Hello there. Yup, you're right, I have heard this story. you've written the poem really well. Flows well. I'm glad you kept the verses short, it keeps the person interested. ...

Hey... I think what you've written is pretty good... But I feel it could do with being a little longer... Increasing the length would be a good idea according to ...

Wow.. Just wow!! You had me captivated... I think this totally rocks!! The emotion behind it is so intense that I could feel it inside me.. You have done a ...

Hello there.. Like the reviewer before me, i too think it is a dark piece... I don't know exactly what but something was completely captivating... I mean...just mesmerizing.. It flows ...

Hey there... Wowwwww!!! It's lovely!! Very captivating and catchy... Realism was dripping and drenched the reader... Brilliant poem!! Harshita :)

Hey there... Well let me start by saying that you have come up wth a lovely piece here...it's mesmerising and shows the reality of our society... you've done a good ...

hey! well this is my first read in a long time and i must agree...it;s really good! you've capyured everything really well...it's short and direct...not wasting any time at all.... ...

Hey... Yeah so i just stumbled across this...honestly i really liked it...the way you've added the flashbacks in really captures the interest... In between it did get slightly boring around ...

Hey I'm just going to give you a quick review...The concept of your poem is real nice... I just have one tiny nitpick.. Wherever you've used the line 'Sometimes I ...

Hey.. So I've come to review like you'd requested.. So the only thing i could point out was the spelling errors.. For e.g. You've 'passed' where it should have been ...

Hi.. So as you requested.. As far as the theme is concerned its really nice...the flow was a bit off in between.... I do have a few suggestions.. ' I'm ...

Heyo.. So there isn't much for me to do as the reviewers before have already done I'm going to skip that...Still i will say that be a bit more careful ...

Heyo there..!! First of all I'd like to welcome you to YWS..!! I hope you have a good time.. And if you need any help at all..feel free to ask..I'll ...

Hello there... So i see this is your only poem..and your new.. So firstly.. Welcome to YWS!! If you need any sort of help..feel free... And now for the review... ...