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Hello there... So i see this is your only poem..and your new.. So firstly.. Welcome to YWS!! If you need any sort of help..feel free... And now for the review... See i feel that your poem is really good...but there's only one thing...I think it's a bit too short... Just increase the length a bit if you can... This is real good and it's got real potential...and I love what you've done with the rhyme scheme...It makes it more interesting to read.. Your poem also flowed very well....so the only thing I have to say is about the length.. work on it and you've got a great poem...!!
Keep writing!!
Harshita:)
Hello, Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate it. I will try and make it longer and then repost it later. Thanks again!