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This work is quite riveting with the little action that goes on in this part. Although I am unsure of the full plot (considering I have not read any of ...

I enjoyed the simple sweet rhythm which you wrote your poem. It's straight to the point while still containing your creativity. I personally can't find any issues with your poem ...

Lol this poem made me laugh! I just love how you poked fun at cliches so easily and turned it into a humorous work of literature. I enjoyed the ending ...

This is an interesting writing style to me, I can't remember exactly how the challenge works so can you enlighten me if you don't mind :) I like how free ...

I absolutely love the perspective this was written from! It's so realistic and it voices the exact same feeling I have about hospitals and the tiresome fight cancer patients have ...

I like this perspective you give. Even though I personally can't relate (I'm not shy or outgoing, I associate with only a few people and other than that I'm reserved), ...

I like the style of your short story. It has a nice little message and the way the message unfolds is rather fascinating. Just some minor grammatical errors, but they ...

Before I do my review I'd like to stat off by welcoming you to YWS I noticed you joined 4 days ago. Now, to start, the concept is evident. But ...

This poem truly shows the determination of teaching pride in natural to a daughter, which makes it rather moving. I get a sense that societal guidelines was the moving motivation ...

This a clear poem with a very easily identified tone. If you ever feel the need to add any extra ideas later on or revise it, I suggest stressing the ...

The charged language in this gives this poem a beautifully vivid theme of the scenery of a nighttime sky. It actually made me visualize Leonardo Da Vinci's Starry Night painting. ...

You have some strong word choices that really flow with your poem's theme. I like the formatting you chose for the line breaks, it really sets an interesting structure that's ...