Published April 12, 2015
Bliss
Bliss is singing
Belting out the words
"Eye of the Tiger"
"Top of the World"
Where no one else
Can hear
Bliss is dancing
All by yourself
On an imaginary stage
On ice skates
With a microphone
Steve Perry
Bliss is being
With your loved ones
Your friends and family
Mom and Dad
Grandma and Grandpa
BFF's
Bliss is ignorance
Ignoring the insults
Ignoring the curses
Believing in yourself
That you truly can
Do anything
Bliss
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Hii...good afternoon...OMIGOSH...Sienna made her first review here at last!!!!...@Siennabrooks
yeah buddy request for ellipsis granted...
Okay kay kay...Bliss oh Bliss...you know a thing your title did the half...this poem is soooo....goood...
My fav lines...
After reading this poem my mind is jumping...I think I just got rid of a writers block...cause I have some lines for you...
Bliss is what you can
Bliss is what you can't
You know you can't
hold ignorance in your heart
But my reviewing eye says that the first stanza is a bit off rythmed...
But it's a very very goood...poem
keep writing...best wishes
~Urbariazi
Aw, thanks Urbariazi! Your review makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
And I LOVE your lines!
Thnx...and u can call me Urba...
Alrighty, Urba!
Hello,
I just have to say that this is one of the most creative forms of writing I've seen. You can make a point that I haven't really read that much poetry but still I don't recall seeing a work written with such an...inspirational rhythm. It's honest and joyous, and more than the words which create it, it's the form which is the incarnation of you title.
Stating any kind of nitpicks would be silly, and I don't really have any of them which would sound even remotely valid. I'm probably highly subjective but I don't really care:) Keep up the good work^^
Thank you!
Heeeyyeee I'm Sienna I bet you don't know me...and guess what!! This is my first review...(*Borrows ellipses from Urba
)
Ok here for review...
First of all this poetry is Awesoomee...Amazing defination of Bliss...I'm now thinking of following you...
(I hope they count it as a review...in fact this is my first comment)
I really liked these lines:
Bliss is ignorance
Ignoring the insults
Ignoring the curses
Believing in yourself
That you truly can
Do anything
Totaly cooolll....
Keep using your rare talent
Take care
Sienna...
This is an interesting writing style to me, I can't remember exactly how the challenge works so can you enlighten me if you don't mind
I like how free this seems and I personally find the flow easy going and carefree. It goes along perfectly with the tone and theme of your poem. I apologize if this review isn't specific enough, I just like the poem how it is and I don't really care to find faults/nitpicks unless they're significant (ex. grammatical and spelling errors). I don't find anything that impairs the understanding of the work, I find it to be so alluring by its simplicity and innocence. Lovely work 
Keep it up!
Thank you!
Oh, and NaPoWriMo is basically a challenge to write 30 poems in a month.