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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Night

    I so loved this.. This is amazing.. I love the exclamation points/words you have put into your work. The message was so Clear and concise.. The beginning sounds like Christmas ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Christmas Villains

    Loved this. This is beyond amazing. Great job. I have no criticism. This poem makes me more excited for Christmas. I could not wait any longer. The ending of your ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Best Friends Forever

    This is just beyond amazing. I loved it. I have no criticism. Just love. The overall theme of this poem was great. I love the drama behind it. You did ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Writer's Block

    Oh my.. When i first read it, I actually had no clue on what you just wrote. I was like: "What in the world?" hahahah.. However, when i read the ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Ocean of Expectations

    i love this piece of poem. I definitely can relate to this. Thank you for writing this such wonderful poem. I have no criticism. This is just beyond amazing. The ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Ode To The Wretched Soul

    I so love this piece. This is fantastic and I have no criticism on this. The grammars are just great and no errors. I love the way the poem was ...

    Dec 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Transgender

    This is just fantastic. I can feel your emotion while reading this piece. I know it is hard to live in a world full of haters. But good thing that ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: For Wondrous Wretched Lover

    What can I say? This is just fantastic overall. I loved your emotion that you put into this piece. This is beyond amazing. The words were so used in a ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Some Christmas Encouragement

    This is just beyond amazing. Love it so much. It is making me feel more excited for Christmas than I feel right now. The words were just amazingly fantastic. The ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Lonely and Suffocating

    This is sad, but I loved it. You did a great job on this poem. I love it when I read dramatic poems with an emotional tone. I can definitely ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Averting Asphyxia

    This is absolutely amazing. I loved every word that you put in this poem. I loved the drama and emotion of this poem that you wrote. The words and phrases ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Hermit (crab) Poem

    First of all, this poem is fantastic even though you're not a poet. You did a great job on this "crabby crab hermit" poem. Is this your first time writing ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rainbows

    This is just simply amazing. I loved the shortness of your poem. It was straight to the point and very understandable. However, I couldn't quite understand the purpose of your ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Queen of the Lilies

    Love it. This is just an amazing poem written by an amazing poet/author (you). By the way, nice choice of topic. Very nice title. In fact, this poem is like ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mountain, Hare Funeral

    This is dramatically amazing. I love it. Love the fact that you started your poem with a great hook. It is very interesting and made me want to read more, ...

    Nov 19, 2014


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