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This is absolutely amazing. I loved every word that you put in this poem. I loved the drama and emotion of this poem that you wrote. The words and phrases were so deep, which is what I am looking for in a writer. I love it when I read deep words and phrases from such a great author like you. This is overall fantastic. Keep writing and keep being awesome!
BEAUTIFUL. I love it. Was able to breathe in the essence of your poem in a single reading. Eloquent. However, I'd suggest replacing words like "trashing" and "deficiency" with more sophisticated synonyms. All in all, this is art. The starting and the ending enwraps the poem very elegantly as well. Hahaha it's deep....no pun intended.