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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Night

    I so loved this.. This is amazing.. I love the exclamation points/words you have put into your work. The message was so Clear and concise.. The beginning sounds like Christmas ...

    Dec 25, 2014

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Christmas Villains

    Loved this. This is beyond amazing. Great job. I have no criticism. This poem makes me more excited for Christmas. I could not wait any longer. The ending of your ...

    Dec 10, 2014

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Best Friends Forever

    This is just beyond amazing. I loved it. I have no criticism. Just love. The overall theme of this poem was great. I love the drama behind it. You did ...

    Dec 10, 2014

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: Writer's Block

    Oh my.. When i first read it, I actually had no clue on what you just wrote. I was like: "What in the world?" hahahah.. However, when i read the ...

    Dec 10, 2014

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: The Ocean of Expectations

    i love this piece of poem. I definitely can relate to this. Thank you for writing this such wonderful poem. I have no criticism. This is just beyond amazing. The ...

    Dec 10, 2014

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Ode To The Wretched Soul

    I so love this piece. This is fantastic and I have no criticism on this. The grammars are just great and no errors. I love the way the poem was ...

    Dec 7, 2014

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Transgender

    This is just fantastic. I can feel your emotion while reading this piece. I know it is hard to live in a world full of haters. But good thing that ...

    Dec 4, 2014

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: For Wondrous Wretched Lover

    What can I say? This is just fantastic overall. I loved your emotion that you put into this piece. This is beyond amazing. The words were so used in a ...

    Dec 4, 2014

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Some Christmas Encouragement

    This is just beyond amazing. Love it so much. It is making me feel more excited for Christmas than I feel right now. The words were just amazingly fantastic. The ...

    Dec 4, 2014

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Lonely and Suffocating

    This is sad, but I loved it. You did a great job on this poem. I love it when I read dramatic poems with an emotional tone. I can definitely ...

    Dec 4, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Averting Asphyxia

    This is absolutely amazing. I loved every word that you put in this poem. I loved the drama and emotion of this poem that you wrote. The words and phrases ...

    Dec 4, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Hermit (crab) Poem

    First of all, this poem is fantastic even though you're not a poet. You did a great job on this "crabby crab hermit" poem. Is this your first time writing ...

    Dec 4, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Rainbows

    This is just simply amazing. I loved the shortness of your poem. It was straight to the point and very understandable. However, I couldn't quite understand the purpose of your ...

    Dec 4, 2014

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Queen of the Lilies

    Love it. This is just an amazing poem written by an amazing poet/author (you). By the way, nice choice of topic. Very nice title. In fact, this poem is like ...

    Nov 19, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Mountain, Hare Funeral

    This is dramatically amazing. I love it. Love the fact that you started your poem with a great hook. It is very interesting and made me want to read more, ...

    Nov 19, 2014


It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
— Neil Armstrong