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Re: Seat 13A
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! This seems like an interesting short story, so let's dive in: The Good Stuff -Even though this story doesn't necessarily have a ...
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Re: Flowers for tears...
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to review. This is honestly really beautiful, so there isn't a lot to say. But I'll try my best. The Good Stuff -You packed a lot ...
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Re: Taken (revisited and edited)
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! I read the third part first (like a crazy person) but chapter one definitely did not disappoint! Let's dive in: The Good ...
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Re: Taken pt 3
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! (I haven't read the first two parts so excuse me if I get a few things confused). The Good Stuff :smt041 icon-spin ...
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Re: A Tempest and a Teapot
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff - You have really good descriptions. From the very beginning, you had a unique use of adjectives that made ...
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Re: Ch-2: A Lot Of Planning
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff : -We have a new cast of characters with pretty unique names (which is always a bonus.) - I ...
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Re: A Solstice Crown
Wow! Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Honestly, this is probably the closest thing to professional writing I've ever seen on YWS. The grammar is on point, there's ...
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Re: The Adventures of Rose Hood Chapter 1: The dragon and the wolf
Hey, it's Serrurie! I've been seeing this series for a while now on YWS and am excited to finally read it! Nice cover by the way! Let's dive in! :D ...
Jul 11, 2024 -
Re: Lost to the Sea
Hey, it's Serrurie! This short story really packs a lot into it, so I can't wait to get into the review! :D The Good Stuff: - I really enjoyed the ...
Jul 11, 2024 -
Re: The Accidental Magic 2:The Second To Last Unicorn
http://Image%20URL Hey, it's Serrurie, here for a review! I see you haven't been here in a while, so I hope you're doing well. Anyways, let's dive in :D : The ...
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Re: Ch 1 -The Excitement
Hi, it's Serrurie! It looks like you have a nice, lighthearted story to read, so let's dive right in! :D The Good Stuff: It's nice to see such amazing formatting ...
Jul 11, 2024 -
Re: The Day the Queen Bee Quit: A Sort-of Murder Mystery
Hi, it's Serrurie! This looks like a very interesting piece so I'll go ahead and leave you a review :D The Good Stuff: I knew you said this was a ...
Jul 11, 2024 -
Re: We All Die Empty Handed and other June Poems
Hi, it's Serrurie! I'm leaving a review for your first poem so it isn't too long, but I'll read the other ones too. (I'm not very good with poetry, but ...
Jul 11, 2024 -
Re: A Paradox: Chapter One
Hi, it's Serrurie! This is a pretty short chapter, but it packs a lot! Let's Dive In! The Good Stuff: Oh my gosh, that ENDING! That was not expected! I ...
Jul 11, 2024 -
Re: Diary Of A Depressed Bipolar Girl
Sending all of my air hugs to you through the screen. I know I'm just a stranger, that we can hide ourselves through the screen, but I'm going to try ...
Mar 24, 2024