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Re: Not Called Poem
Hey, Orabella! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - All of the talk about the 'same old, same old' stuff commonly found in ...
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Re: My Biggest Worry.
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - First off, I'd like to say that this doesn't read like an essay (in a ...
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Re: Your First Pain
Hi, Ellie! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - So I'm guessing this is in the perspective of someone talking to a child ...
Jul 29, 2024 -
Re: The Artist
Hi, Ley! It's Serrurie again, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This poem is right-aligned, which I always thought was unique :D - Repeating ...
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Re: Your Heart in My Hands
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I don't often see writers that incorporate romance and Christian values into their poems (heaven ...
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Re: Earning ways by affiliate marketing
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - To start off, your opening paragraph is clear and concise. It gives us a clear ...
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Re: Fear Not (such an original name I know)
Hi, Rae! I've been searching for some poetry to review and this looks pretty good! Anyway, let's dive in: The Good Stuff - You create vivid imagery in the first ...
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Re: Afraid of Losing You
I'm gonna hand it to you, you had me the first half. *** Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This immediately ...
Jul 28, 2024 -
Re: I Knew Chapter 1
Hi, Kaia! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff -Your first line really packs a punch and immediately draws the reader's attention. - A ...
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Re: what is a woman?
Hi, Ley! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Ooh, this is a prose-type poem! I always love those :D - I love ...
Jul 28, 2024 -
Re: my little sister and i
Hey, it's Serrurie again, here to leave a review! (I absolutely love your writing style, by the way). Anyways, let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I think you did ...
Jul 28, 2024 -
Re: me and every cat i've loved before
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - As per usual, your writing has next to no errors. You have some of the ...
Jul 28, 2024 -
Re: Quicksand
Hi, Lullaby! It's surprising to see that no one's reviewed this yet! I really enjoy your poems, so let's dive in: The Good Stuff - The figurative language in this ...
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Re: I am a Complex Organism
Hi, Ley! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - A longer poem! I have wanted a longer, prose-style poem for so long , ...
Jul 28, 2024 -
Re: Love in despair.
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I like the repetition in this poem. It provides intensity and emotion. (And the word ...
Jul 26, 2024