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Re: My First Experience With Cannibalism
Hello, it is gottahaveFaith here reviewing what you got. First off how are you doing? Hope you are happy, getting enough sleep, maybe eating a cookie. I really like your ...
Mar 19, 2015 -
Re: A Little Girl Grew Up In Here
Hello runandhide! First off, Happy New Year and happy holidays. And anytime is a good time to start writing poetry. I used to write poetry all the time a few ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Every piece of me is true
Dear Ravenboy, Hey, its gottahaveFaith and I wanted to start by saying that I like the overall idea of your poem. There are only a few things I would suggest ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Birds (by Sméagol)
To GoldFlame, Ha, I like it. It is interesting to put a poem into a point of view we all know about. Since I have seen the LOTR I could ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Run
Hey Okuro, You seem to be very popular on here! Anyway, to your poem. What I would like to say to it is that I am not to sure what ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: All that is
Hey iamwhoyouknow5, I really enjoyed reading this. I know you didn't describe the author in anyway I just pictured someone sitting down on a wooden chair in an room staring ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Liam
Dear RLK, I LOVED THIS!! Me being a big supporter of all things LBGTQ + more I love reading stories like this. This story was very well written and I ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Alignment - Prologue
Dear StellaThomas, I thoroughly enjoyed that. Now if this is a prologue and she is about to die what the hell is going to happen! I love having that feeling ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity, Chapter One
To ShadowVyper, So far, I thought this was very very good. There are a couple of things I didn't quite follow. First, she was in the library and then all ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Friends Forever
Hey Okurro, So your poem- wow. That actually kind of scared me a little. Not in a bad way really because if you could draw emotion out of someone using ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: The Happy Home
Dear FireFox, WOW!! I got captivated into the story almost immediately. I love stories that don't take too long to get into. I would love to see this story become ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: Likes
Dear ConverseFireGirl, Hey, so I like this poem because it seems like you are just airing your thoughts on paper. I feel like it is a chain of thoughts and ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: In Your Eyes
Hey ConverseFireGirl, Not all short poems are bad poems, this one was good. I liked the imagery and the descriptive words you used. If given time I believe that you ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Would you like to know how you died?
To Tennantsayswhat, Wow, I don't even know how to respond to this story. At first I was confused in the beginning because I was trying to figure out where they ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: What Lies Inside
To MysteryMe, I know you aren't looking for any reviews but I just wanted to say- WOW! I absolutely loved this and the writing style you implemented. It didn't seem ...
Nov 29, 2013
