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  • Poetry » General, General Re: an ode to the rebel of ages past and future

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy revmo! This is delightful little poem to say the least! I like the structure as it guides the reader to read it ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: hold my hand

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy revmo! All in all this is an interesting topic that the reader can easily relate to. Your use of brackets help to ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: The Kitten

    Hello, Godly here and happy review! Hm an interesting poem to say the least. You wanted us to find a meaning so I will try my best to dig down ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lost in the Books

    Hello, Godly here for a review and welcome to YWS! Overall this poem is well structured and keeps to the rhyming scheme you have created. You seem to put across ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: Her Name is Kindness

    Hello, Godly here for a review! This poem is beautiful! Not only was it well written with an interesting idea, the ending was impactful and unexpected. You have written a ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Death by happiness

    Hello, Godly here for a review! Wow, this is a really well written poem! You use well placed sophisticated vocabulary that really draws me in as a reader alongside imaginative ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Why fall in love?

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! I love the layout of this. It's unique and grabs the readers attention. The use of rhetorical questions and direct ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Ageless Faces Ancient Traces

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! This poem is really well thought through and the imagery is is crisp and easy to imagine. The rhyming scheme ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: highway headlights

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! This is an amazing piece! The imagery and the way the words help the poem flow easily makes it so ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Star crossed lovers..

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! I like this! It's short, sweet and straight to the point. The point you seem to get at here is ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: The Color of the Sky

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! I love this so much. The imagery is well thought out and creates a world for the reader to enjoy. ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Old Man

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! The imagery in this is pretty strong as it gives the reader a good view of what is happening. I ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Together

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! Might I just announce that I love the format! I love it when poems flow and the format reminded me ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Innocence

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! Wow, this is a really well thought out poem! I love how you focus on the fact that our minds ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Woes of the Bladder

    Hello, Godly here for a review and happy review day! Wow. Just wow. For such a strange topic this poem is really good! Your descriptions are cleverly thought out and ...

    Aug 28, 2016


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