Hello ThePhantomPrince, it's Turtles514 here and I'll review your work today.
First off this is an intense, eye-catching poem with rhyming that just pulls everything together. In the end I don't see any mispellings or grammar mistakes which is an accomplishment really. However l am no professional writer so there could be some hidden things I missed. Overal though I really enjoyed reading this it's complex and connected to how the real world works with society and such.
Turtles514
Points: 2
Reviews: 3
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