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Hi there! Wow. You used a very intermidiate set of vocabulary here. :) The poem flows well, it rhymes pretty well, and you're concept has gotten through well. I don't ...

Hi there! Wow. I honestly love the concept you are going for. No matter how hard you try, you're always the "odd one out", just like you're title says! Anyways, ...

Hi there! As you've seen in the other reviews, I totally agree on the format. It's easier to read, and it's how poems are supposed to be written. They're called ...

Hey there! Wow, just wow. I love the poem! It has so much emotion, that it can make you actually feel it. I'm not much of a poet, so I ...

Hi there! Wow. That's a really good poem to relate to. I love the concept that you were going for- how everyone is the gold. We grow, we age, but ...

Hi there! I agree with Justtrying, it's an amazing poem, but it's lacking a lot of capitals. Your poem is really emotional and has a lot of mixed feelings in ...

Hi there! I really like your poem. It has a lot of emotion in it. I'm not much of a poet, but by reviewing others' poetry, isn't the form of ...

Hi there! I like your poem! It contains a lot of emotion. The title is very fit for the poem. I'm not much of a poet, so I don't really ...

Hi there! Wow. That's all I can say. This is my first time reviewing a Romantic Short Story, and I am glad I read this one first! This is amazing! ...

Hi there! I like your poem! it has a sad touch to it. Though I have a few nit-picks: wa t ching sun form night to day brake - Shouldn't ...

Hi there! I really like your poem! Peace is something everyone wants, right? I'm not a poet, so I can't really help you improve, but I can praise and encourage ...

Hi there! I really like your story! Wow, Snape was very kind that time! I love how you made Draco such an innocent little boy! It's sweet. Even though your ...

Hi there! I love your poem! To me, it's pretty much saying how you can overcome your past and move on with the help of God. It's beautiful and deep. ...

Hi there! I like your poem! It reminds me of the Beatles song, "Strawberry Fields Forever". It gives me that sorrow feeling, kust thinking about the death of all the ...

Hi there! I like this poem! Especially since it sort of tells a story of a boy and girl living their lives together in a world nobody knows of. Personally, ...