Awakened

This was amazing! my favorite part is:
No opinions, never firing up my cannons,
Shooting out my bullets,
Under suppression pleasing others.
This poem is amazing, i wish i could give you some tips to help you improve but the problem is, you dont need to improve this rocks! i am going to start following you your poetry is exceptional!

Thanks a lot for the reviews!
I cannot change the first word of every line, as it is an acrostic, but I will work on the flow!

Helloouuu, This is Demoness speaking and she's come to give her opinion on this piece!

Soo.. Well... I thought this was a great poem. BUT the flow was a bit choppy with all the dots instead of commas and the structure of the stanza was a bit wierd.. but look over the puntuation and structur and I think it gets a good A, maybe even with a +! xD

Good Luck & Keep Writing¨

// Demoness

Wow. I think it's very well spoken. Used the wrong format for it though. There should be commas.

great poem and love the words you have choosen to use.

Hi there!
I really like your poem. It has a lot of emotion in it. I'm not much of a poet, but by reviewing others' poetry, isn't the form of the poem supposed to be like this:

Silence only,
Embracing death,
No opinions, ever pleasing,
Never firing up my cannons,
Shooting out my bullets,
Living under suppression,
Pleasing others,
So that I am yearned by them,
Oppressing my own thoughts to reel in others' love,
That which stings me kills me,
Until now I've longed for life,
but embraced silence only