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Hi again Oldsoul :) I guess I'll review this work, too. What I love about your poetry is that it's so short yet meaningful. Others have already covered spelling and ...

Hey Oldsoul, I said I'd have a look at your work so here I am :) It's very good and conveys a lot of emotion. I won't repeat what everyone ...

Hey theironnovelist. I'm afraid this is hard to review as I can't fault you. I got lost in your story so if there are any errors they flew over my ...

Hey MrJenius. Let's start with the nitpicks. Legend mentioned two below but I have a couple more: "...bodies of five men and one women" shouldn't that be one woman? "But, ...

Hey Lapis. This was quite an interesting read. It was very creative and well thought-out. Either you have naturally perfect writing skills or you edited this perfectly because I can't ...

Hey RavenMoonStone. First a few nitpicks and suggestions. I think you overuse your commas and capitals, and this definitely needs some proof reading and editing but I'm sure you can ...

Hey KnightTeen. First let's cover the nitpicks so we can get to the good bit. I noticed there's a couple times where you are missing a full stop (after 'prerogative'). ...

Hey anonymousx. First off, this is a beautiful piece so well done. Cleverclogs covered the nitpicks and other things I was going the point out (quicksand, breathe, punctuation, etc...) so ...

Hey TakeThatYouFiend. I agree with Luvzi and LittleSister about it being hard to review this piece because it's not all your work but I'm going to try because we need ...

Hey MaggieBray. This is great and I wouldn't be surprised if you end up expanding on this or incorporating it into a story or something. This is a very serious ...

Hey NafaKitty! First off, never apologise for your work, whether it is dark or long or unperfected. It is as if you are apologising for your talent or apologising for ...

Hi Maverick! This is a really good poem but there are a few things that you could change or correct. Firstly, to spelling and grammar. I picked up a couple ...

Hey eleutheromania. I love this piece and I totally agree with: "You never know when simple, mundane things will awaken your mind's imagination to profoundness." Sometimes the most simple things ...

Hey Stripeslife! This is great and I can't wait to read more. I noticed a couple of spelling and grammar errors, particularly punctuation. The main solution is just to carefully ...

Hey WallFlower. Hang on while I compose myself.... Okay. I'm good now. This is my first review in a while so I'll do my best. This was amazing. I may ...