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  • Short Story » Satire, Narrative Re: Faulty Memory

    Hello ghost223! Fox here! I try to be fair so I'll point out good things as well as the not so good things. :> I'm sorry if I sound a ...

    Jan 27, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams thief

    hey beautifulish, fox here to review. also, welcome to yws! (disclaimer: i'm in my poetry class rn and there's this kid that's rapping horribly, so if i seem distracted that's ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Euclides

    Hey Zackymas! Geoff here for a short review because I don't have a lot of time. :> Short stories/flash fiction is my forte and I'm going to be honest, there ...

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Cracked Glass

    Hello, EscaSkye! Geoff here to review. :> Well, some of the wording in this poetry is golden. At least to me it is. and the cracked glass on the bedroom ...

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Recycling metaphors and filling garbage bags with cliches

    Hey Kaos! Geoff/Ravi here to review... or shall I say... gush? I love this piece so much. After I write this I'm going to go scour the rest of your ...

    Oct 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Prologue

    Hi EmmaEaton! Geoff here to review! So I'm not going to go too far into detail with this story, because I'm going to be honest, it needs work. You have ...

    Oct 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Envy

    Hey, LaPetitePrincess! Geoff here to review! I really liked your story. I liked the message at the end and especially the way you worded it all. However, improvement wise I ...

    Sep 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hello, Love... Good-Bye, Love...

    Hi, mb1221! It's Geoff here, happy to review. First, right off the bat, I noticed some formatting and grammatical errors. (I'll get to what I liked in a minute, I'm ...

    Sep 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Jazz band of sin.

    Hey babydollblues! Geoff here to review~! First impressions: This was a great poem in so many ways. I especially love the following lines. These false shadows of which have burst ...

    Aug 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Windows

    Hey EverWinter! Geoff here, happy to review at this late hour. ^w^ First off I'm not entirely sure if this was meant as a religious poem, (yes I know the ...

    Aug 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: condolences

    Hola! geoffles here to review! This is a nice emotional poem. The words are very cohesive together and it's dramatic and an interesting read. As far as reviewing goes the ...

    Jun 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: the thoughts of a used lemon wedge

    Heyo megsug! I'm not much of a poetry person, but I really liked your piece! The formatting made it really interesting to read. There are a few errors that could ...

    Jun 15, 2016


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