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Re: Together
wow, very intense!!! i like intense the situation was great because well most teenagers are going through this everyday the killing temptation to take it to the next level so ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: Put Down The Blade
wow! that was intense!! i could actually feel the emotion in this poem i do believe its just a little to wordy for my taste but then again everyone has ...
Sep 30, 2013 -
Re: Darkness outside my heart
I love how flowy your sentences are very go out made complete sense Although I felt as though you forced your rhyming, I mean if you are going to rhyme ...
Jun 3, 2013 -
Re: Over Exposure
im still trying to wrap my mind on whether this is a screamer song or a lyrical one, i guess thats open to interpetation haha i love these lyrics because ...
May 22, 2013 -
Re: I Never Thought
ahhh what a wonderful song this is, it reminds me of me and my boyfriend lol its so cute and i believe every girl felt like this at one point ...
May 22, 2013 -
Re: Birds of Freedom
well hello there im gabrielle(: let me just be the second to say how beautiful i thought your poem was. it was honestly inspirational, i believe that this was your ...
May 22, 2013 -
Re: To an Ex-Teacher
first i would like to say is wow!!! i loved your poem for the fact that it came from your heart. but like EZRA said the poem concept/event/topic of the ...
May 22, 2013 -
Re: crack.
what a wonderful poem this is(: i quite enjoyed it i kind of thought that it was more of a journal entry though lol but like i told everyone that ...
May 22, 2013 -
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OK so I'm not a great reviewer but i honestly felt like i was reading a story instead of a poem. when i picture a poem i think of stanzas ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: Traveler
what a wonderful poem!!! i was stunned by it honestly. i honestly loved the imagery in this poem. i love poems where i can really visualize the whole picture. looking ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: Blinded Love
ok to start off i would like to say i really thought this poem was awesome!!! i love how you captured the mood!! i love the rhyme meter that you ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: Soulstones
well let me start off by saying that i enjoy poetry espeacially short poems because they get down to the point. but i feel as though could have been a ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: Firsts
This was a poem??? Where are the stanzas? I like it a lot but I just felt that I was reading a short story or something, your grammar and punctuation ...
May 20, 2013