gabrielle23

wow, very intense!!! i like intense the situation was great because well most teenagers are going through this everyday the killing temptation to take it to the next level so ...

wow! that was intense!! i could actually feel the emotion in this poem i do believe its just a little to wordy for my taste but then again everyone has ...

I love how flowy your sentences are very go out made complete sense Although I felt as though you forced your rhyming, I mean if you are going to rhyme ...

im still trying to wrap my mind on whether this is a screamer song or a lyrical one, i guess thats open to interpetation haha i love these lyrics because ...

ahhh what a wonderful song this is, it reminds me of me and my boyfriend lol its so cute and i believe every girl felt like this at one point ...

well hello there im gabrielle(: let me just be the second to say how beautiful i thought your poem was. it was honestly inspirational, i believe that this was your ...

first i would like to say is wow!!! i loved your poem for the fact that it came from your heart. but like EZRA said the poem concept/event/topic of the ...

what a wonderful poem this is(: i quite enjoyed it i kind of thought that it was more of a journal entry though lol but like i told everyone that ...

OK so I'm not a great reviewer but i honestly felt like i was reading a story instead of a poem. when i picture a poem i think of stanzas ...

what a wonderful poem!!! i was stunned by it honestly. i honestly loved the imagery in this poem. i love poems where i can really visualize the whole picture. looking ...

ok to start off i would like to say i really thought this poem was awesome!!! i love how you captured the mood!! i love the rhyme meter that you ...

well let me start off by saying that i enjoy poetry espeacially short poems because they get down to the point. but i feel as though could have been a ...

This was a poem??? Where are the stanzas? I like it a lot but I just felt that I was reading a short story or something, your grammar and punctuation ...