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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Cosmos

    Hi, Happy last review day in 2016! This poem is an interesting poem. I am a crazy stargazer myself that had looked up to the sky for more than 1 ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Love You, Grandpa

    Hi, This poem is just so sad, cute and raw. Seriously, I can feel you. ** The words or rather your diction here is quite simpler and yet, so nice. ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Forgetting you if I can

    Hi! I've been trying to review this for a while, but it seemed I only waited the review day to review this, so sorry for not reviewing earlier. (Well, whatever, ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Breathe in and breathe out

    Hi, It's an interesting topic for a poem and I can't say I don't dislike it, but I surely like this unique attempt for a poem. ** Like Lumi said ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Forgive

    Hi, Just a reminder note that I don't read the previous reviews because I'm too tired to do that, so sorry if I repeat something. However, if I did repeat ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the world, unreasonably quiet.

    Hi, I love the way the title resonates with the points in the poem AKA the title is suitable for the poem. *** I got nothing much no comments, really, ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ocean

    Hi, This is a good poem, but not as romantic as I expected it to be since you told us that this will be a romance poem. Anyway good try ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning

    Hi, This poem is well, perfectly normal. It has a clear message and I got no much trouble understanding this. Well, I don't really like using second point of view ...

    Dec 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: misstep

    Hi, I will try to review this in harmless way possible. !!!*!!! Your poem is a fast read for me. I understand each points straight ahead although I don't know ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Hiding in a Corner

    Hi, Good poem. I hardly see any error or mistake. This poem has this aura of something like depression or social anxiety disorder or like anything mental related. The interesting ...

    Dec 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Snow ramblings

    Hi, Remembrance or Forgotten Memories or whatever names you've gotten yourself. And I just remembered this little song from Piano Tile 2 when reading your poem. :'( I don't know ...

    Dec 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Drowning

    Hi, A nice poem. Lovely; sad: Two words that really describe this poem. So, I was thinking of this piano piece when I was reading this poem. It was just, ...

    Dec 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Place I Know You

    Hi, First of all, I gotta share this song with you. The song's in my playlist and when I clicked on this, this song's playing and I found that really ...

    Dec 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Freedom

    Hi, Sure, freedom is beautiful; your poem is clarifying that up. This review is to fulfill the long-but-not-lost request you gave to me. Okay, like usual, you are using beautiful ...

    Sep 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Reminiscing~

    Hi, I get it, but this poem is really confusing me a lot like why you wrote that when you weren't going to explain on that thing. Or why you ...

    Sep 15, 2016


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio