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Hi, Yet, here i'm giving you a chaining reviews! I don't want to say much but surely, i love the ideas you used. The plots is overall, good and steady! ...

Hi, I'm saving now you from the treachery of the green room! Red would have something to say about the words/sentences. Anyway, I would love to go one paragraph by ...

Hi, what a great fantasy you got in here. Although, I hardly do any fantasy, but I still love fantasy. Well, fantasy is a part of you imagination and imagination ...

Hi, I'm on with the review (I know: I suck in opening...and yet, I was repairing your opening paragraphs): There was definitely something special about these candies. It could not ...

Hi, I was attracted by the title. By the way, you misspelled the title, though; it's suppose to be Conundrum You put two 'n' there! I love the meaning of ...

Hi, I was stunned by this gloomy story as it could be happening already. It's possible; it's sad; it's unjust. This writing left an effect on me, which is quite ...

Hi, one of my favorite genre of poetry, lullaby! Yeah, this is fine for a lullaby for everyone except baby and toddler because it's so gloomy; kinda scary sometimes (when ...

Hi, welcome to YWS! I hope you're fine here. On with the review: I love the title very damn much. I agreed with you that rains do help us hide ...

Hi, Your poem has meaning. A normal feeling that we always feel. I love the meaning along with the language you used. Anyway, I think there was a mistake that ...

Hi, First! Welcome to YWS! I loved your avatar! A simple poem, great, I like this. You used a simple but beautiful language. You, however, gave me a vivid picture ...

Hi, sorry to hear about your physics teacher. Anyway, your poem was good. It was rhyming a little but at certain points, it was just *BOOM! Try to fix that ...

Hi, this is weird for a nightmare but still, it was good enough especially for a fifteen-years-old. Nothing much to comment but I found some mistakes(sorry if I didn't list ...

Hi, this is sweet. (But it's making me sad out of sudden!) Just reminding you left [would] here! It would be good if you could add it. The word [would] ...

Hi, this thing has some meaning at least. I'm glad you said: I was never good at poems... You WAS never good at poems, so now you'RE good. Prove it! ...

Hi, yeah this was quite good (did I mentioned great?) and this story was starting with two main characters, Em and Eliot (both started with 'E': quite romantic, actually! (XD)) ...