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Hi. Dream as a topic. It is surely interesting one. Like all poems with dream I have seen in my life, yours is a little different, making it lovely. Your ...

Hi, Whoa! Repetition... No good, no good. I'm so sorry for the 'No good, no good." things, but I must. Everyone got different mind, so my mind said that this ...

Hi, Hello, it is about time for me to start reviewing as I had left it for so long. I feel so sad about it... Nevertheless, your poem had encouraged ...

High is into the sky, Low is onto the ground. Hi! I know that I've been reviewing your previous parts of this story earlier than this one. I am so ...

Hi, whoa, so long, but beautifully-made. Every things you conveyed in this poem shined vividly. I think I couldn't find any particular grammatical mistakes, but the usage of punctuations. When ...

Hi, by the way, I love your avatar! Nevertheless, this is an overall, a good poem. Nitpicking... My mind pours out words overfilling the brim of my consciousness. They cascade ...

Hi, and sorry if I made a mistake or offended you in my review. Well, it's because I haven't review poetry for a week... Good flow, good rhyming, but unfortunately, ...

Hi, yet, I think I somewhat know you... Junior. Yes, I agreed with you that junior is quite troublesome, rude and of course, very damn good AKA kind/helpful/sincere/humble/etc. First! What ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! I love the title, but you don't need to put the words I highlighted: Crazy Is crazy does - first shared work... I know you're honest, ...

Hi, I'm here as I promised you back then. (Sorry for not completely filled our promise. This thing, at least, is what I could do for you. I'm sorry; yet ...

Hi, *petrified *shocked *surprised These words describe my feeling toward your poems/poem. I think I can grasp what you meant here. The title represents the three poem inside, whilst the ...

Hi, you...you....this is beautiful. Hitherto, I've been reviewing yours....but this is just....fantastic. I don't feeling to comment/fix your grammar....right now...I can't utter a single word....(if

Hi; yes, this all was all right! Well, that was to your question in the last line. World and life is surely is a damn thing. (Sorry for my language.) ...

Hi, “The heart was made to be broken.” ~Oscar Wilde I was amazed by your poem, it was beautiful, such a beautiful moment is truly hard to fine, as my ...

Hi, welcome to YWS! (I know I already welcomed you...XD) A rather good poem with a simple description and a lot of meanings. You used the relationship between those words ...