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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: On and On

    Hey I just went through your poem and you have written the poem very well.You have described about the incident happened in France.I am really proud that you have a ...

    Nov 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: My friend, Bob

    The poem is one the coolest poem which i had read.There was complete different representation of the character named 'Bob'.The title of the poem 'My friend,Bob' is different from the ...

    Nov 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Fall

    Fall is a nice name for the poem and it is completely different from what i expected from it.Your poem convey about genocide and that made me the poem a ...

    Nov 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Mild Meltdown

    Hey there, the poem you written was good and simple.Mild Meltdown is a good name for this poem far as this poem is good to listen but my suggestion for ...

    Nov 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: DUET :Chapter 8:

    The novel was good i never felt boring while reading it.the title was great i think it is the eight chapter but after reading this i would like to sweep ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: he sent himself to hell

    'he sent himself to hell' the title of the poem was something different from what i expected this poem could bring out.The poem was short but had an impacting lines.I ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: The right mindset

    It is a good article and in this article i see a hidden personality who want make the world a better place. I feel you have to include more points ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Somehow..

    Hello I just went through your poem, first of the entire plot is great and the title of the poem is eye-catching. I am not a perfect writer to command ...

    Mar 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I'll always remember you

    The idea of choosing a romantic one is really an attracting point in the poem .The style of writing is appreciable and the writer had put a good time for ...

    Mar 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Satire Re: The Hammer in my Head

    The poem creates a different experience for readers.The execution the poem is the main loving factor of all readers and the presentation of title is also a notable point while ...

    Mar 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: The Altar

    The idea of choosing a romantic one is really an attracting point in the poem .The style of writing is appreciable and the writer had put a good time for ...

    Mar 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Real Life

    The execution of the poem is the main loving factor of all readers and the presentation of title is also a notable point while reading this poem .The poem has ...

    Mar 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Affinity for Infinity

    The title of the poem is a strong attraction to the readers and an idea creating a poem with your own style is a different idea i had rarely seen ...

    Mar 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: sigh

    The poem is great and you have served every word in this poem with atmost sincerity and dedication even though mistakes are our partners by birth we have to move ...

    Mar 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: When the Storm Comes

    This is a wonderful and magnanimous story .I felt the theme was truly stupendous. I must say that it was simple plot but was well executed both literally and dramatically.The ...

    Mar 2, 2015


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