Lets face the facts, you all have a dream. Maybe you've let it go, maybe you still hope for it. But let me tell you this, if you spend your life hoping for your dream to come true it'll never happen. You have to know with full confidence that you're going to do it. Everyone has doubts but never let them control you, never let them decide for you. Some call it illogical and insane to have a belief in yourself beyond all else. But its a necessity to achieving anything in life. The only person in your life who can change it is you. You could be anything you want, even now it still isn't too late. Don't let yourself be trapped by circumstances. It is illogical to have such a belief in oneself, but you'll need this illogical nature, this unstoppable attitude, a delusional quality. Your dream is within reach if you believe it to be so. Most of us fear our own potential because we think we'll never live up to it. People don't want to accept that they have power because having power isn't easy. But you do have power over yourself and your destiny and its vital to understand this. It's here should you want it, but you can ignore it if you so desire and let yourself down. Or join me here and work hard on yourself, take the journey to change yourself into who you'll yet become. If you think like this, then you're going to live out your dreams. See you on top.
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Pernicus, this was a very inspiring message from you and I had a great pleasure reading it. So, for that, I want to thank you first. Thank You.
Now, you've talked about dreams here but not in a dreamy style. Instead you've shown us the reality of the majority. How we give up on our dreams without fighting. That's not only relatable but that's a mentality waiting to be changed.
In my opinion, your starting is bit hasty. If you started it with "You/We all have a dream" I think that'd sound more nice. Otherwise, I agree with you wholeheartedly. Yes, hope is important, for me, our biggest weapon but only hoping won't get us anything. Even to have breakfast, we need to get out of our bed and prepare it and here we're talking about dreams. We need to be confident and put our doubts aside to make it come true.
These few lines, I need to remember them. Personally I doubt in myself a lot like many other even when I know it's a barrier between me and my dreams. We all need to be optimistic and have faith in ourselves but it's not that easy either. But, probably, repenting is more hard. It's quite like a war with yourself, isn't it? But, yes, at the end of the day, they can reach their dreams who dare to fight.
Throughout your article, you've tried hard to say that it's our dream, we have got to fight for it, believe in ourselves etc. Only a person who's fearless can say these with such determination. And, your last couple of lines of course show that. Personally here, I want to wish you a very good luck with your life and your dreams.
Your last reviewer has talked about APJ Abdul Kalam, (Hope you know, he was the president of India and an enthusiastic leader who inspired people and worked hard till the last day of his life) I would very much like to quote him here!
So, that's all from me. Have a very good time and thanks again.
Oh! It'd be good if you could quickly revise your article, minor changes needed in some places. And, you should consider making couple of paragraphs instead of putting the whole in only one.
~Nire.
Thanks a ton for the review and feedback, I wrote this to try and share my mindset with other writers and hopefully inspire them to be dreamers. Too many people give up without coming back for another swing.
It is a good article and in this article i see a hidden personality who want make the world a better place. I feel you have to include more points in the article and increase the sentence.Apart from that the topic selection was great.I movement after reading this article I feel this article have a great relation with the objective of Dr A.P.J Abdul Kalam who want to create great changes in the world.I personally feel that you can fulfill the objectives of Kalam sir
. '' People don't want to accept that they have power because having power isn't easy'' this is the true fact in life because world needs great leaders for the survival of human beings.I feel what ever you written in the article is being followed you and you are the person who want to create positive changes in the world. With that hope i conclude my review
Thanks for the review and the chats we had