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Hi new person! :) I'm being a rebel and reading this even though I'm 14.5! This poem is very well-written - it's about an interesting topic and has some brilliant ...

Hi there! :) I like the subject of this poem - it's not a very common one, and I think you did well with it! Just a couple suggestions for ...

Wow - what beautiful imagery! You're really good with metaphors, I can tell. The vocabulary is lovely as well (ha, it rhymes!) and the theme is haunting and eerie, but ...

By the end of the story, my mouth was literally hanging open in shock. Wow. Very well-written and suspenseful, and I can only imagine what happened to poor Jenna after ...

This poem was marvelous and very unique! I like this part - "He’d walk beside you wherever you went, A little jump in his metronome step." I love the little ...

This piece has left me speechless (not literally, of course). It is quite simply beautiful, and very, very relatable. Forget about painting pictures in your mind, I was there; I ...

Hello! I love the theme of this poem, especially your use of metaphor - it painted a lovely rueful watercolor in my mind. The title fits well. I have some ...

Hi! This poem is lovely and deep - I like the comparison of leaves and lives (pretty similar words, aren't they?). I agree with the previous reviewer (about removing "today"), ...

Hi there! What I like about this poem is that it sounds quiet and comforting, somehow. As if someone got up in the middle of a silent, dull room filled ...

Hi there! :) First of all, I love the message you're presenting here - especially these lines: "Attention, or the lack of it puts our kids in detention It could ...

I like the emotion in this poem! "Gloom" describes it wonderfully. I especially like these snippets: "She let the warm breeze Melt in her hard pores." "Stretching their hands gave ...

Wow, this poem is brilliant! :) I love the formatting and flow of everything, and I've never thought of the South in this way. I'll never look at it the ...

This is quite interesting so far! I have a couple suggestions, though... " I would like it cold,please." I told him. " Alright, calm down." he said with a frown. ...

I love this poem - it sounds desperate and haunting, and yet beautiful. In the way an abandoned house is beautiful. I especially like the last line and the metaphor ...

I love that this poem is so unusual - it comes as an unexpected jolt. I agree with thegirlwhowrites, this isn't just another poem about falling asleep. Your vivid imagery ...