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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Freedom

    This is gem for a review. I enjoyed this poem, it was a very emotional and feeling peice and I know the numb feeling or at least my version of ...

    Jan 12, 2022

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Tired

    This is gem for a review. I enjoyed this poem, it has a very meloncholly feeling and I know the feeling or at least my version of it. The poem ...

    Jan 12, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: What's Wrong With Male Tears?

    This is gem for a review. I enjoyed this poem, it has a very meaningful theme thati heavily support and respect. I like the way it is wrtten there isnt ...

    Jan 12, 2022

  • Art » General, Narrative
    Re: The Walls Are Watching.

    This is gem hoping out of his jewelrybox for a quick review. I don't review very often so if this isnt helpful just let me know how I could improve. ...

    Aug 22, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Learn To Love Again

    This is coffee spilling from a mug to write you a review. Hi fire, more excelent poetry I see. First impression. The reference that school has uncovered this feeling, this ...

    Dec 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative
    Re: Pitter-Patter

    This is Coffee leaping out of a mug and leaving a review. First of all, I picked to review this because I have a soft spot for rain poetry. I'll ...

    Dec 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Drawings

    This is gem climbing out of her coffee mug for a quick review. Hi Spunky, I will be reviewing a work for you today. This poem is relatively short and ...

    Sep 30, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: Never again

    This is gem climbing out of her coffee mug for a quick review. Hi Fire, I am not completely sure, but I don't think I've reviewed any of your works. ...

    Sep 30, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Fiction
    Re: When the world has burned

    This is gem flying up from her jewelrybox ready to review. Introduction of Feelings for the Piece- I like this poem, and how its written in questions. It makes you ...

    Aug 16, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: That blue eyed boy

    This is Gem popping out of bed for a review. This is a short piece, while I like the conciseness I do wish it were somehow more descriptive. I think ...

    Mar 31, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Narrative
    Re: Ashes, Ashes (We All Fall Down)

    Chancing a review. Well, that hurt my little soul... good job! I like how this poem is a story. The story carries emotions through metaphors. It makes my heart sink ...

    Jan 31, 2021


  • Chancing a review, I don't much care for politics, but I like the bitter taste your poem leaves in my mouth, it reminds me of coffee. (Though I'll review it ...

    Jan 31, 2021

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic
    Re: pink band-aids and your old prom dress

    Gem chancing a review. I picked this out to review days ago. I like how this poem reads like a memory or a stream of conciousness. It addresses you addressing ...

    Jan 31, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Reality

    Chancing a review. I enjoyed this poem. The premise of lies being what save most of us is odd and unspoken but absurdly true. Most of us lie to ourselves ...

    Jan 25, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: lulubelle

    Chancing a review. I loved your rhythm and rhyme scheme, the way you used 'abab' and changed rhymes with constitent rhythm fit. :> The poem has a powerful message, and ...

    Jan 25, 2021


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