This is gem for a review.
I am intrigued to what inspired this poem. It has a lot of beautiful imagery but the large vocabulary used makes your brain work for it. Written very elegantly, yet you don't use full stops, really interesting... I like the flow of the peice. You capitalize every begining line and it really makes me wonder how differently it would read if you skipped a few lines or wrote entirely in lowercase as it is a stylistic choice. The last line really was the one that most captured my attention. It really leaves you curious. I feel like this poem could have went in any direction but it stayed in middleground. I don't dislike that, because it seems the purpose of the poem is plainly to describe all that is seen and felt in the frame, but I do hope you use some of the ideas captured here, perhaps in different poems. I want to see what you can do with the idea that we aren't alone.
What is out there? Does it call to us? Do we already know it?
The poem pulls you in and makes you really appreciate it, not so much for the feeling it evokes but for the imagery it gives you. I like it, I think you should play with emotive phrasing as well, catch the readers hearts in their throats as they look at the picture too. Very interesting peice I did enjoy it. Explore your writing and have fun.
Have a nice day/night. Keep writing. Much love, CoffeeGemini <3333333
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
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