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fallenoutofgrace

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Network of Keys Chapter 6: Ky, First Floor/Level part 3

    first off, wasn't expecting a princess smash-down but then again all is possible in the network of keys. So lets get started shall we? I enjoyed your imagery when you ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Bully

    I really can relate to this poem and your title interested me from the beginning. So fare Nice poem, I enjoyed how your poem flowed and had enough to say ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: In The Darkness

    First things first... Holy Keys! this is awesome! I Loved how its all this good things that the dark has like the speakers dreams coming true everything is as it ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Me

    Okay, sensing a lot of hate and anger toward the people and towards you. I think you should take the emotions you feel and just word them a bit more ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dingo stick at midnight under the darkness moon"

    Greetings fallen here to review you. I liked how it was like a date and it one could have gone, I also enjoyed your twist in making limy a vampire ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: You're Going To Make It

    First off you don't see many spiritual poems or stories on here it seems and your is one of the few ive actually liked a lot. One thing im not ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Hurt me

    Alright first off * high fives* go reviewlution! second I like this a lot. I was actually laughing towards the end when you wrote " you wont see four because ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: How a Teenage Heart Breaks

    Hey fallen here writing for reviewlution team. his dose clearly takes teenage love to the exact steps that we all love and you related it flawlessly. I didn't know why ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The never ending journey.

    First off I think you nailed the five stages of a break up heads down. The speaker in your poem you can feel the hurt and the sudden urge to ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Truth hurts more than lies

    First off this is extremely relatable and you did an incredible time. It looks like you just took the story of a lot of relationship and made Perfection. I enjoyed ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: New Rooms

    Hey fallen here to review. First off your diction is incredible, the way you describe and use imagery made this poem even more better I believe and I think you ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: for her

    Fallen here to tell review. Alright first off quick change remember to capilized your I's. Beside that I enjoyed your concept in your love poem. it was very pretty and ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Four (I)

    Hey there fallen here let's just jump into it shall we? The titled pulled me in because im a fan of fairy tales and you clearly did not disappoint I ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 2

    Hey so far really good. but quick question how old is everyone because first I thought jewls was a teen then I get to the middle like holy snap she's ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    Hello there while your debate essay certainly create a rousing round of debates in the future I shall take you up on the arguing against so how about it? Let ...

    Apr 4, 2014


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