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Hello, bookishminecrafter! Artemis here for a shiny new review three days before Christmas! :D First Off: I loved your title. It's just great for a poem like this one. Keep ...

Hey, Artemis28 for a review four days before Christmas! :D I want to talk about your lack of punctuation. In this whole poem, you have exactly three period. Sometimes, it's ...

Hello, ElvenJedi! Artemis here for a shiny review five days before Christmas! :D First, I want to talk about the rhyme scheme. For most of the poem, you find words ...

Heiyo, AlexOfLight! I'm getting a very Ga'Hoolish vibe from this piece. The name gives it away--Guardians of Lyra? A lot like Guardians of Ga'Hoole, don't you think? :D My first ...

Welcome to YWS, simplesu! I'm Artemis28 for a review. :) First, I'm going to talk about grammatical things. In one line you have "isn't not". I'm guessing you only meant ...

Heya, Zelda! You may not know me, but I'm in the Warriors Club here on this site. I've seen some of your posts. :D There are typos in this piece, ...

Heiyo, occymay! Artemis28 from Fantastic Beasts on this fine Review Day! :D What drew me in was the title, so you can pride yourself on that. The Journey of Acceptance ...

Heiyo, plaguewritings! I'm here from Fantastic Beasts for an amazing Review Day. :D I'll jump right in. I liked your beginning, what with the characters and the warbird and all. ...

Hello, Bailey! I'm Artemis28 for a review. Happy Review Day! :D Let's start at the very beginning. I noticed something right away--you repeat great (twice), and I feel like there ...

Heya, milabales11! I'm Artemis28 and I'm here to review. Welcome to YWS, by the way! :D The first thing that struck me was the format. I would think it'd be ...

Hello, Ejay! I'm Artemis28 for a review of your poem. :) Grammar: I noticed that you used quite a lot of periods. Lots of your lines ended with that, even ...

Hola, EverySecond! Artemis wants to give some reviews today, so you've got the pleasure of receiving one. :) Now, we might as well start. The second stanza is quite contradictory, ...

Hey, Eros! It's Artemis. We've met before. :D I take no offense if you don't remember me. With this piece, you did a pretty good job. There are some grammatical ...

Heya, Rememberance! My name is Artemis28. Nice to meet you. :D Let's start, shall we? The idea of your poem was fine. The ending was really nice, and I love ...

HEYYYYY Dracula! Artemis on the site for the Spoopy Skeleton team. :D I pretty much know nothing about Sherlock Holmes or Doctor Who, but I'm trying my best to keep ...