emilyhaller23

Hello! Just to start, I LOVE this piece! Having experienced the sweet torture of love before, I found myself relating to this piece more and more as I read. I ...

Hello! So first off, I like the idea here. This poem tells a small story, and makes the reader crave more of the story. I myself can say that I ...

Wow. This piece was so deeply moving. I truly hope this isn't written from experience, as I've been through something like it and would never wish it upon anyone else. ...

Wow. Just wow. Your writing has moved me in a way most writing fails to do. I myself have been in a relationship that would've been better off not existing. ...

Well, I'm here to give a review! At first glance, the title is fitting and straightforward; two traits I find most appealing. And as I moved forward to read your ...

Overall, you've done pretty well in composing this piece. There are, however, a few areas you may consider further working on as to strengthen this poem. I think that by ...

Interesting take on the game! This poem is pretty creative and fun. I don't see anywhere that would require improvement, either. There are a few places where punctuation is needed, ...

Let me just open by saying one thing; "wow." Your writing is absolutely beautiful. I deeply admire your ability to evoke deep emotion through words as you write. This piece ...

I'm going to lead into this by saying that this poem is well composed. Your message is clear, and your point is strong. In some places, you made some grammatical ...

Let me just say, this is probably my favorite work I've read so far on this website. I love your emotion-coaxing phrases, and how well you convey your message. While ...

First off, I'd like to just say, "wow." This work has taken my breath away. You've evoked an amazing sense of pain within me, as I'm sure you aimed to ...

I think there's definitely room for improvement here. What you have is a wonderful start, but I think with a little dedication, this poem could become better and better. At ...

Wow. Ok, well, not really sure how to respond to this one. As a typical human being, I'd probably be a tad daunted by the boldness if this text. But ...

I'd like to start by saying that I admire your use of similes. You've painted a beautiful picture of what this room would look like, should it ever be a ...

I'd like to start off by saying that your work is beautiful. You have a gift for poignancy. There really isn't much I'd suggest to you, other than to begin ...