dystopianmonkey01

Hey, I'm going to review this. I'm particularly fond of short works, I myself cannot stand long and tedious things to read. Perhaps this is why I like this poem ...

Woah... this was very long to read. Too long I think, short and sweet is much better than long like this. I'm tiana and I'm here to review this poem. ...

Hi Tiana here for a review. I really like this poem. It's got a dark and kinda film noir vibe about it. I love your use of cynicism and sarcasm ...

Hey, nice work on this. And welcome to YWS! I'l be brutally honest, I don't love this prose poem ( i think that's what you've tried to make it, but ...

I love this! I'll start with the things I loved. I really enjoy the humour and satire element to the poem, I like how you've used the emotionally frustrating feeling ...

Hey Apricity, this was great. I really liked your layout and it was extremely capturing to read throughout the entire poem. I can depict so many emotions through this, like ...

Hey, Tiana here for a review. AGAIN. Haha. Okay, I love the format. I've never seen it look like that before, I must admit it looks good! Is there symbolism ...

Hey again! This poem is lacking in my opinion. I was hoping for something to exceed the first in terms of power, but this was a bit of a disappointment. ...

Hey, Tiana here for a review. Now I see this is one of three poems that you've done, I will review the other two after this one. Your metaphors are ...

This is a really good poem. I won't dive into the content too much as there sure is a lot here and the majority of it is good. I won't ...

Hey, Tiana here for a review. As a disclaimer, I'm not a poetry expert; take my suggestions with a grain of salt :) Okay, so, for me this is almost ...

Ahhh!! Love this! You've used such good imagery and metaphors and pesonification, I particularly like the "when the warm summer air would stir the river" This is really good. I ...

Hey! Tiana here for a review. As a quick disclaimer everything I say is to be taken with a grain of salt since I am by no means an expert, ...

Hey, Tiana here for a quick review. Now as always the disclaimer of me not being an expert, blah blah blah! And these are all suggestions! Okay so your format ...

Holy moly, that's all I have to say. You are honestly and undeniably a fantastic writer, you've shown us here, you've used such a broad range of similes, metaphors, personification, ...