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Re: Words Kill
Hey Dogs here for a review! Before I start! WELCOME TO YWS! I know you'll love it here in this community, and if you have any questions, comments, and/or concerns ...
Aug 24, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 1
Hey, Dogs here for a review! Overall I really liked this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next, but there are a few errors and mistakes, I found ...
Aug 14, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Prologue
Hey, Dogsrule5 here for a review! Wow it's been so long since I've written one of these haha! Overall your story is amazing, but there are a few things that ...
Aug 10, 2018 -
Re: [Insert Title Here] - Part 2
Hey Dogs here for a review! I just read the last chapter you wrote! First off, I again really liked this chapter, but once again have a few suggestions. 1) ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: [Insert Title Here] - Part 1
Hey, Dogs here for a review! So first off I want to start off by saying that I really enjoyed this! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out! ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: midterms
What a great poem! I can relate so much to this! I legit just finished my last midterms and let me tell you the last 3 days (of all midterms) ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: IF ONLY
Hey Dogs here for a review! I really liked this poem, and can actually relate to it a lot! I just have a couple of suggestions for ya! 1) Instead ...
Dec 18, 2017 -
Re: Lost to You
Hey Dogs here for a review! Let me start off by saying that I really enjoyed this poem and I loved the personification of the heart. I do think that ...
Dec 17, 2017 -
Re: A Poem About Grapes and Cheese
Hey Dogs here for a review! First off let me start off by saying how cute I thought this poem was. Okay I liked how it was short and simple, ...
Jul 25, 2017 -
Re: She Likes Girls
Hey! Dogs here to review! So I thought this story was good, but I think there are many ways it could be better and improved! And before we get into ...
Jul 17, 2017 -
Re: Beauty
Hey! Dogs here to review! I can so relate to having "body issues" and I can so relate to this poem. First off let me start by saying I really ...
Jun 15, 2017 -
Re: Examination Day
Hey, Dogs here to review! First off I really want to say I really liked this poem! It was very well written. I also hate examination days, and I know ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Thunderstorm
Hey! Dogs here for a review! First off, I really liked this poem. I just noticed a few nitpicks here and there which I will state below. Here are some ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: Vietnam- A Poem
Hey Dogs here to review! First off, this piece was absolutely amazing. I'm speechless. I have no clue where to start! Topics like this are very powerful, and what you ...
Mar 19, 2017 -
Re: We are the same.
Hey, Dogs here for a review! Overall you have an amazing piece, and I really, really love it! Everything you said is very true, but most of the time people ...
Feb 3, 2017
