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  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Words Kill

    Hey Dogs here for a review! Before I start! WELCOME TO YWS! I know you'll love it here in this community, and if you have any questions, comments, and/or concerns ...

    Aug 24, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Chapter 1

    Hey, Dogs here for a review! Overall I really liked this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next, but there are a few errors and mistakes, I found ...

    Aug 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death ~Book one It Begins Prologue

    Hey, Dogsrule5 here for a review! Wow it's been so long since I've written one of these haha! Overall your story is amazing, but there are a few things that ...

    Aug 10, 2018
  • Short Story » Literature, Humor Re: [Insert Title Here] - Part 2

    Hey Dogs here for a review! I just read the last chapter you wrote! First off, I again really liked this chapter, but once again have a few suggestions. 1) ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: [Insert Title Here] - Part 1

    Hey, Dogs here for a review! So first off I want to start off by saying that I really enjoyed this! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out! ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: midterms

    What a great poem! I can relate so much to this! I legit just finished my last midterms and let me tell you the last 3 days (of all midterms) ...

    Dec 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: IF ONLY

    Hey Dogs here for a review! I really liked this poem, and can actually relate to it a lot! I just have a couple of suggestions for ya! 1) Instead ...

    Dec 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lost to You

    Hey Dogs here for a review! Let me start off by saying that I really enjoyed this poem and I loved the personification of the heart. I do think that ...

    Dec 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, Other Re: A Poem About Grapes and Cheese

    Hey Dogs here for a review! First off let me start off by saying how cute I thought this poem was. Okay I liked how it was short and simple, ...

    Jul 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: She Likes Girls

    Hey! Dogs here to review! So I thought this story was good, but I think there are many ways it could be better and improved! And before we get into ...

    Jul 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Beauty

    Hey! Dogs here to review! I can so relate to having "body issues" and I can so relate to this poem. First off let me start by saying I really ...

    Jun 15, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Examination Day

    Hey, Dogs here to review! First off I really want to say I really liked this poem! It was very well written. I also hate examination days, and I know ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Thunderstorm

    Hey! Dogs here for a review! First off, I really liked this poem. I just noticed a few nitpicks here and there which I will state below. Here are some ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Vietnam- A Poem

    Hey Dogs here to review! First off, this piece was absolutely amazing. I'm speechless. I have no clue where to start! Topics like this are very powerful, and what you ...

    Mar 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: We are the same.

    Hey, Dogs here for a review! Overall you have an amazing piece, and I really, really love it! Everything you said is very true, but most of the time people ...

    Feb 3, 2017


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
— AceassinOfTheMoon