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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Be Gentle

    I liked how you wrote about this subject. About fears. It's really good, and I loved the way you described it in your poem. I really liked your poem, but ...

    Dec 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Conquered

    Great poem you have here, but I think you can make it so much better. I need improvement in my writing, and everyone does. So with a little help from ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hiding Within

    I can relate to this poem very well. The way you described it was great. Here are a few tips. Warning: Please don't take these like I'm a harsh person, ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Laughter Is The Best Medicine

    This was a great poem. I really liked it. It's true laughing is the best medicine because when you laugh it makes you feel good. Sorry about all of the ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Sands of Time.

    Hey this was a very good poem, and I really liked it. You have a great vocabulary with very descriptive words. Details is what helps the reader know what's going ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Empty Chair

    Really good poem. I really like it. You have a great rhyming scheme, except for one place. When I sleep between cold, empty sheets, I will pretend you are here ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book One ~ Into the Mists Chapter 1

    Hey, I Really liked this. The chapter was really strong. I really like your story, and I can't wait to keep reading. Something I really like is how the main ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Survives: Prologue

    Very good. I really liked this. This was a good way to get the reader on edge, like they have to know what happens next. So a few things below. ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Silent Beauty

    First off, nice poem.. I really liked it. It was a little creepy, but you know it's amazing. I'm just kind of speechless right now. I like how I could ...

    Nov 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I Say I Love You

    Okay. This was kind of a sad poem. No wait wrong words I meant to say, this was a sad poem period. LOL! I really liked it though. It was ...

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The One who Can't Love Me

    Hey there. Dogs here for a review, and the first thing I have to say is that I really love your poem. So anyway. I really thought your poem had ...

    Nov 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Walk

    Hello, Dogsrule5 here for a review. So I thought your poem was very good, and meaningful. It had a lot of power, but here (listed below) are a few things ...

    Nov 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: On and On

    Hey. I really love this poem, it means a lot. You have a great meaning for this poem. So this poem was really meaningful. I think it would mean a ...

    Nov 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Zero

    Hey, pretty good poem here. I like it because it has a lot of meaning. This poem starts pretty slow then gets faster and faster then BOOM it hits the ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Stone faces

    Another unique poem, i have read. Very interesting indeed. Hola, Dogs here for a review. (Hola means hello in Spanish, just fyi) So very interesting poem. I will start out ...

    Sep 16, 2015


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