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Hello there Dobby. Dogs here with your review today. Interesting piece here, although I would suggest that you put this into "others" works instead of this one. Because, unless this ...

Hello there Ariana! Dogs here with your review as requested. Ok, to start things off, I would greatly disagree with all the notes toes offered in regards to your rhyming ...

Hello there Illusion! Dogs here with your review today. Well well, this was some excellent writing here. I got a sense of Edgar Allan Poe style of writing with that ...

"a simple girl with simple tastes, went to school every day..." Simple small nit picky error here, but it should be a colon after "tastes." So it should be: "simple ...

"the time that i woke from my little journey everything changed." A couple things here: Firstly, the first letter of a new sentence always always ALWAYS should be capitalized. Secondly, ...

Hello there Density! Dogs here with your review today. Ok, before I even start on the content of this piece, this poem was incredibly difficult to read because of the ...

Hello there Toes, Dogs here with your review today! Okey dokey, lovely poem topic here, you have some nice writing. This topic has a lot of potential, and content wise ...

Hello there Alonic! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hop you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you need ...

Hello there Sparkle! Dogs here with your review today! And first if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you ...

"I thought what could I actually do" Howdy Umaima, Dogs here with your review again as requested. Ok, whenever you have dialogue or thinking or thoughts going around in the ...

Hello there Umaima! Dogs here with your review as requested. To start things off WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you need ...

"where ever their were trees multi- coloured" Two issues here, firstly there needs to be a comma after "trees" to help out with the flow. Also, "where ever" is one ...

"lidless cup and dancing in the midnight air.." Howdy Cap! Dogs here with your review as requested. Ok, two things here with this line. Firstly, try to omit all useless ...

Hello there animal my friend! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, lovely little piece you whipped up here. I wouldn't exactly call this a love poem, but certainly ...

Hello Persy my dear! Tucker here with your review today :). Well this is just one excellent piece of writing I really cannot deny. Certainly one of the best pieces ...