dogs

Hello shadow! Dogs here with your review today. Ok, I think your opening is excellent. A wonderful idea of starting a book off in a dream with a comic sense ...

Hello Jon! Dogs here with your review today. Ok, this is a good start for your first poem Jon but you still got a lotta things to do here. Firstly, ...

Alrighty, Dogs here with your review today! This piece is looking good but certainly could use some touching up. Lets dive in shall we?: "it's colour seemed to have been ...

Hello Jalmoc, Dogs here with your review today. Ok I think this is a wonderful piece of writing. I just came back from a long break of YWS and it ...

Howdy Flower! Dogs here with your review today. Alrighty, first off I like the simplicity and shortness of this poem. Way to keep it too the point and keep the ...

GEELYRIAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! HIIII!!!! It's Dogs by the way if you couldn't read my name lol. Anyways back again for some reviews on your amazing poetry. I think this piece, as usual, ...

Hey Jcoons! Dogs here with your review today! Ok so looks you have a good general start here and set your self up with a great stepping stone to become ...

Hey there Lumi! Dogs here with your review today! Anywho I love this piece, you have such great description and imagination in your writing. The story line of this poem ...

Hey there Innergy! Dogs here with your review today. Ok so this is a good piece of work you got going on here. It's cute, it's adorable, and it's predictable. ...

Hey Aubriel!!!! Dogs here with your review today!!! Well I really enjoyed reading your poem over, it has great description of that thing of the night. I really liked the ...

Hey there Small fri! Dogs here with your review today :). Ok so I read this piece over and I didn't fully get it so I had to read it ...

Hey Luis! Dogs here with your review for the day :). Ok so it looks like you have a good poem here, there is lots of good description, I think ...

Hey Fallen! Dogs here with your review today! Thanks for the review on my last poem so I though I'd repay the favor :). Ok so this is a great ...

Hey Potter! Dogs here with your review today :). Ok so I can tell or really feel like that you seem to be much more of a short story writer ...

Hello Anna! Thanks so much for your review so I thought I might re-pay the favor. I really enjoyed this piece, short sweet and as always the rhythm is amazing. ...