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Re: Heavy Wedding Band
Hello there story! I'm not sure if I've told you this before... but I love your avi! That was a fun movie :). Ok interesting piece here, you have some ...
Mar 1, 2013 -
Re: frost.
Hello there life! Dogs here with your review. Ok I like this piece, you have a good theme going on here with only a few bumps in the road. For ...
Mar 1, 2013 -
Re: in my father's garden
Hello there Jiggity! Tucker here with your review, if I may start with how much I love your avatar. Been laughing at that for many a hour. Okey dokey, back ...
Mar 1, 2013 -
Re: The Millennial Ch. 3 (Pt 2/2)
My goodness... so much work in my life! Well I'm excited that I'm FINALY here and able to read this piece. I've been looking forward to it :). Although do ...
Feb 28, 2013 -
Re: The Affair
Hello there Bull! Dogs here with your review as requested. I'm glad I could get to this before the end of the night. Okey dokey, i think the imagery that ...
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: Mermaid Mythology
Hello there Audy! Tucker here with your review today :). I think this piece was just wonderful, I loved your description and writing this poem. I think the topic is ...
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: Miss you...
Hello there Bullhead! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, to start things off I think this is cute and than you turn the tide and make it heart ...
Feb 27, 2013 -
Re: Hidden Tree
Hello there MIles! Dogs here with your review, goodness gracious silly me... I thought your chapter two was the first chapter. Hence my confusion, apologizes. Do disregard most of the ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Amber Eyes
Hello there Shino! Tucker here with your review! Do excuse me, but I'm just going to go on a rant of compliments here with maybe like one or two extremely ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Windchime
Hello there Shelby! Dogs here with your review. First if I may say WELCOME TO YWS! I do hope you enjoy your time here, if you ever need anything, help ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: The Seraphim and the Prince
Hey there Aley! Tucker here with your review :). So, to start, the writing in this piece is excellent. You have great smooth writing and wording, I really don't have ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Evening in the City
Hey there Nomad! Dogs here with your review. First if I may say: congratulations Nomad for being the final submission into my poetry contest! Do keep in mind that all ...
Feb 25, 2013 -
Re: The Rose and the Sun
Hello there Bull! Dogs here with your review today! If I may start by saying that your avatar is adorable and I really like it :). Ok now on to ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Goldfish Princess
"and by something" I like your opening Awesome :). Also I think you mean "buy" instead of "by" in this line. Also, I've noticed that in all your short stories ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: A Word With Lake Dal
Hello there Shoaib! Dogs here with your review. To start, I really liked this poem. It has some nice imagery and you did an excellent job of using simple imagery ...
Feb 24, 2013
