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Re: Grief
This poem beautifully captures the profound ache of grief after losing a loved one. The imagery of colors fading and a barren landscape reflects the emptiness and desolation felt in ...
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Re: Why must I keep smiling?
This poem hits you right in the feels, doesn't it? It's like a little reminder that even when life feels like a never-ending storm of gloom, there's still a glimmer ...
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Re: Hey you, reading this.
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Mar 19, 2024
This piece is a thought-provoking exploration of our everyday experiences, encouraging us to dive deep into the present moment and truly appreciate the sensations and emotions we encounter. It prompts -
Re: School aka Prison
This is an imaginative and creative story, and it's wonderful to see a young writer exploring their creativity! Here are some constructive suggestions to consider: Encourage Detail: Encourage the chil
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Re: Edge of Tomorrow
This poem beautifully captures the journey of navigating through uncertainty and seeking hope amidst darkness. The imagery of "Hanging on the edge of changes" vividly depicts the feeling of being ...
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Re: Corset.
This poem resonates strongly with contemporary discussions surrounding body image, societal expectations, and gender norms. While corsets may no longer be a prevalent fashion trend, the pressures face
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Re: Why Judge?
This piece beautifully captures the essence of diversity and the importance of embracing individual differences with empathy and respect. The author's message resonates strongly as they question the s
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Re: An idiotic piece about love
So, the whole thing kicks off with this quirky observation that "love" spelled backward is "diputs," which sounds totally nonsensical, just like love itself. And then I realized it's the ...
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Re: Know its valid.
I actually wrote a poem that is similar to this idea. I won't post it here as to not take away from your work, but it made me connect to ...
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Re: Life as a passage of knowledge
So this piece is an interesting and I might have a more unique view of the piece than most. But if I missed the point completely, you can tell me ...
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Re: All Gods
The assertion that all gods from various pantheons and religious traditions are real offers a refreshing and inclusive approach to understanding the diversity of human spirituality. It celebrates the
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Re: ***
Title Analysis: The title "Perfection" sets the stage for a contemplation of beauty standards and the pursuit of an idealized appearance. It suggests an exploration of the complexities and contradicti
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Re: Blood on paper
Opening Lines: The opening lines set a visceral scene, depicting the act of pouring out one's pain onto paper. The use of vivid imagery, such as "bleed" and "rivers running ...
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Re: Junkyard Dog
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Mar 16, 2024
In this poem, the use of imagery creates vivid mental pictures that help convey the speaker's emotions and struggles. The metaphor of "digging up the same bones" conjures an image ... -
Re: Depression
This piece talks about how tough it is to deal with depression. It messes with how you see yourself and makes you feel like nobody cares about you. It's weird ...
Mar 16, 2024
