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Okay, lets begin by saying, this is really good. But I promised a review so I'll do my best to help you. Now understand this, the poem it begins too ...

I see the way you look at me The hatred in your eyes Your little half smile Tells a million lies I hear the way you speak of me Talking ...

Okay, I'm Vernon and I'll be your reviewer. Now, this poem is a rant, it's got nothing worth while. Harsh but true, understand this poem makes me feel nothing and ...

The rain falls, the rain falls. To a time where the clocks call. The children cry. The parents weep. As death makes rounds through the streets. The dusty footsteps up ...

I can honestly say, that this poem is unique to me. You wanted me to be brutally honest, I feel it's kinda vague and the repetion though excellently used through ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer for today. You're idea isn't original, by far, but it's apparent even as you read it, you feel a great deal about this topic. Now, ...

Ami Amanda She’s the one who gives the words life. The one who makes picking up a book dangerous. The one who insists that the fragments and sentences Coil around ...

Hmm... a debate should persuade you don't give any proof to back up, you instead just throw facts at us and expect us to believe. A little fact, The Emperor ...

Yes... yes, I echo the others, it seems very broken and it also has bit too much navelgazing, and is it a cat or a Dog first I think it's ...

Okay BBB, first off the chat was hard I get but you could make it more interesting have someone else in the chat. Another thing, it's very annoying at least ...

Oooh, from how it began I was skeptical, but this poem works perfectly so show a kids fear. It would be better if you made it a person, instead of ...

Beautiful, it's nice to see poetry can still be pretty when short. This has so much, and I like how it's so simple yet so much is said. Terribly amazing. ...

More like it Tim, much more like it. I really feel this poem, it's beautifully wonderful, though the meaning isn't all that clear it leaves you thinking and wondering. It's ...

I love this! It's amazingly written, you really capture the beauty in such a small thing. I was awe struck at wording and beauty you put into the world. You're ...

Tis, interesting for sure, just not enough worthwhile, you try to explain something but you never really get that message out. Expanding on this, would help greatly. Just work on ...