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Dear CharlotteS, Hi, my name is Bailey. This is a really nice poem, not too shabby. I like how it's rhymed, but I think that with such a mixture of ...

Dear Holysocks, I just read your poem "save your hero's tears in jars" and after reading this one, I noticed how much I enjoy your style. It seems to have ...

Dear Holysocks, I don't have a lot of thought about this poem since my head is kind of all over the place right now, though I do want to say ...

KJSJKJFGJSFGSGFJHFGJFGJGF LET ME JUST SAY THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING. MY SMILE I SWEAR WAS LIKE THE CHESHIRE CAT READING THIS OMG. So, hi. XD. I went to the green room ...

Dear Gangamash, HOLY HECK THAT GOT DARK FAST. Hi, my name is Bailey. I just wanted to say that this was actually amazing to read. I did not expect that ...

Dear InfiniteRectangles, Hi! My name is Bailey! I just wanted to say that this is a beautifully written poem! I don't find myself reading a lot of rhymed poems on ...

Dear saentiel, Hi, I'm Bailey! This poem is pretty well written, I think. It's all very relevant to the topic, so it doesn't sound as if you are trying too ...

Dear Tylexie, Hi, I'm Bailey. And may I just say HOLY WOW. I actually love this so much. I had to pause between lines to soak it in. Because as ...

Dear herbgirl, First of all, holy sh**. You said this was about your brother, and usually I'd just brush it off since there are so many people out there who ...

Dear hipstersquid, First of all, you should earn brownie points for your username. Just saying. Second of all, oooh, I like how you came up with this idea. It really ...

Dear Authorian, You asked me for some constructive criticism, but I don't see what there is to change. Though, I'm not really that great of a poet myself, so I ...

Hey, SynonymousTom! My name is Bailey and I guess I'm reviewing your work. I've always had a love for poetry and by the "3am thoughts" description, I kind of got ...

Dear wolfgang87, Wow. Your poem very clearly addresses the issue of feeling really different, like something isn't right about you and you really just want to be normal. I enjoy ...

Dear, iamanaspiringwriter, I'm new to the yws community, and you are officially the first person I have made a review for, and frankly, I'm impressed. I really enjoyed the fact ...