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  • Poetry » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey there! I'm Kekai, here to review your poem. You have a really interesting concept here; from my understanding of it, the narrator is expressing the feelings that she has ...

    Apr 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: People are Towers

    Hey there! Kekai, here to review your haiku. Wow! I really like the concept that you have here. From my understanding of this, people are strong and tall like towers, ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Literature Re: The Contemplation

    Hey there, rhiasofia! Kekai, here to review. I can always count on you to write such interesting poems! I really love the concept that you have going on here, about ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: An Everyday Princess

    Hey there! Kekai, here to review your poem. I really love when people base poems off fairy tales, so I was glad to check this one out. I really like ...

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Woman Made of Glass

    Hey there! Kekai, here to review your poem. I /love/ when people do poems based off of fairy tales, and this one is no exception. I love a lot of ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Maturity

    Hey there! I really love the concept that you have here, and this is such a well thought-out poem. I really love that you're expressing exactly how you know you're ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Ribcage Blossom

    Hey there! Great concept you've got here. I love your metaphors and imagery in this poem a lot. I was just wondering, first off, why it's in the articles/essay section? ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: It Was A Chrome World

    Hey there, friend! Kekai, here to review your first ever poem on Young Writer's Society! I think that you've done a great job with this. I really like the story ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: Conformity, a Virtue

    Hey there! Kekai, here to review your poem! The first thing that I would like to say is WOW. I really like the way that you seem to be portraying ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Unrequited

    Hey there, friend! It's Kekai, here to review. First of all, love is one of those concepts I usually steer clear of, so I was pleasantly surprised when I clicked ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Other Re: Hate cannot conquer love.

    Hey there; Kekai here to review! What a strong poem that you have here. I really love the rhyme scheme and the concept. I immediately felt a lot of sadness ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Just another love poem

    Hey there, friend! Kekai (T) here, to give you a little review on your first YWS work. I'm psyched to be reading your poems on here as well as at ...

    Feb 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Aftermath

    Wow. This is such a strong poem. I really love the feeling that you get out of this, even though it's very simplistic and minimal. It's so strong and yet ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: ​Murderous Cold

    Hey there! Kekai, here to give you a review. First of all, this poem embodies everything I've been feeling lately: painful winter blues. I feel like I haven't seen the ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Only Human

    Wow! Let me just say, I think this is one of my favorite poems that I've ever found on Young Writer's Society. I love your imagery, and your rhyme scheme.A ...

    Feb 25, 2014


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— Bram Stoker