davidechoe13

Hey! I must say this would have been interesting, if i could understand what was going on. Now i have not read the first chapter so maybe thats a little ...

Hey! Good story, there are just a couple of things i wanted to point out. The first being the first paragraph, it really seems to go from seemingly addressing the ...

It's me again... or maybe you are seeing this review first, oh well i also did another scatty cat review. Anyway, your first little half sentence there: When scatty cat ...

I really thought this was kind of funny but i actually wouldn't mind seeing this evolve into a real story, i think it has potential. Be sure and watch how ...

Hey! I found this very interesting, and would honestly like to read more. Now the first part honestly, was very hard to get through, there were several spacing problems that ...

OK, here is my review, I really think that this story has potential but i found some small problems i would just like to address. The first would be the ...

Awesome! I really like this genre but it's hard for me to find something like this, i really liked it and felt it was going really good right up there ...

Hey! An interesting piece i was actually pretty interested at first but, honestly I started to lose it once she got in the house, and when that happened I realized ...

I liked this piece immensely, the description of the characters was very good it shows how i need to work on that myself, i saw the characters easily in my ...

just wanted to let you know about one little part which is just an overlooked error i do them all the time but up there where it says a vagabond, ...

Hey enjoyed your story it kept me interested till the end but, what just happened. its a good piece and i enjoyed it but what's going on here in the ...

I saw a couple of wording errors and that was it. "IT goatee was tied and the rest..." The it should probably be a HIS if that's what would wok ...

OOOOOOh interesting this is really the only chapter ive read of your lunar blaze but i like it a lot. Only saw one teensy problem that can be fixed as ...

Interesting, just interesting. I only saw one or two problems one which i believe this was just over looked in the writing process but you spelled "bleachers" wrong every time ...

I like your work i saw no grammatical problems with this piece but where's the story im not really seeing it i really don't know who samitra is or really ...