darko.demark666

We had one case of giving poem for Christmas present already... Never mind...I'll say the same thing...If it's from your heart then it's OK (Yes, you can write that you ...

See, now here's the thing... Haruno said: "Your rhythm is corny." I say it's terrible. You actually ruined(or wounded) a perfectly good poem. Not just good, but great poem(if we ...

You sure get a lot of reviews...but I've got to say that I read your other poems and they were much better (for my taste)...

Jesus, you sound mad... ??? WTF? :)

But in stanza 5, are you saying it is the flashy clothing that you yourself wear and is what people see, or the person you are grieving over? If it ...

Hi Beemarie! I shall be reviewing your poem tonight. *bows* Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.......hilarious...

darko.demark666 ~ The stars aren't multicolored, the sky is. Which is why it says, "In a multicolored cloth woven out of night and electrons." And in the picture, the sky ...

Haha, world is so small.......

...I guess you got the message from administrators about the rules :) It's so nice when someone actually reads these things...

OK, thank you for advice...

I'm sorry dad that i couldn't be, all that you expected out of me. i know i disappoint in everything i do, and even though you hate me, i'll always ...

I have a dream I don't have a dream about the good, about the bad, the unbelievable, about the sad, Just of hope's kind stream. My God send me a ...

Darko said you're thirteen and writing a bout love and that perhaps you should stay away from that, but I don't think any writer should stay away from writing about ...

Hey God! When you come to poetry, it would be best not to mention times or dates, or the amount of time passes. It just screws up the whole timeless ...

Did you know: Charles Baudelaire was the best (for me still is) at his spleen. He also put together all of senses in one and he is great for many, ...