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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: short poem

    Chapped Eating the dandruff scabs off my head my eyes are watering from nonexistent onions or emotions . A lways there is a pipe cleaner constricting my heart or scalding ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fly

    Fly Well, Cherie, there's one good thing Comming out of this goodbye; Comming->coming You'll soon You will soon (makes the verse longer, 'cause it's too short, opposite of previous) Be ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Truth Behind the Lies

    The man smiles softly, but no-one knows why. On his face a grin, but his eyes betray the lie. He's telling to the world, he's telling to himself, though all ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken Light

    Broken Light The sun’s fingers break the glassy vista that billows skywards and lights her ghostly eyes , Great as they follow mine with the tenderness of lost years. She ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Silent Tears

    Behind the smile is a dry tear ... Dry=harsh Behind a strong saying is a weak girl. Good, but if you have strong saying why are you weak? Behind the ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Passion's Vicious Presence

    Fighting our passions oh so fleeting, Still I dread the thought of our meeting, good verb Drenched in sweat, my heart fast beating, huh? We are blinded by lust, quickly ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Test

    Every time I see you When I saw you I get fear in my eyes, Try: "Fear glinted in my eyes" my hands get sweaty, no way and my head ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The thorn on my rose

    I trace the petals with adoration, and pray that this beauty will never cease. But when I hope that such splendor, such glory will never expire , i do not ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Drew a Smiley on my Knee

    I drew a smiley on my knee, because life needed happier things. My knee looked so plain, and all knees look the same. You could see the smiley on my ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Forever On A Bridge

    Two stand on a bridge, away from the world. Midnight has gone, four hours, or more. Try for hours and see if it fits. So it becomes "more of a ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the callousness of newborns

    Tormented by the winter chill, a scattered skeleton that hides its bones in the rooms where collisions used to happen, when the music played notes that shattered hearts, digs graves ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: When you smile

    I was reluctant to post this so please let me know what you think. When you smile, you remind me of a cliche of you and I... ...of happier days. ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sister

    [quote="Ducati"]You are so substantial; you fill up their hearts and my face is darkened by your shadow. I am so fragile flitting in the wind, your hug holds me down ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You Are Loved

    Hello, my friend, I have your present here. I’ve been making it for Christmas this entire year. Did you really write it entire year? If you want to give a ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Black Water

    [quote="Suzanne"] Black Water I tangle myself in the net of life while trying not to drown in its waters . Perfect I tread waves weakly , tied down by anchors ...

    Dec 21, 2008


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